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Hm? Right off the bat, something seems strange... Why would an irredeemably evil character like that have an evil stepmother - which is something that main characters usually have? And it was apparently even mentioned in her setting.
From the original story's standpoint, it seems strange to me that they would have a bitch like that have a pitiful point when she doesn't get to be redeemed in the end? Even if the mother's trying to have her son be the successor and all that, i don't see why an author would specify such things instead of having the villainess just untalented at martial arts and whatnot
With that said! It's only chapter 1 and it's a pretty minor thing so I won't dwell on it any further
From the original story's standpoint, it seems strange to me that they would have a bitch like that have a pitiful point when she doesn't get to be redeemed in the end? Even if the mother's trying to have her son be the successor and all that, i don't see why an author would specify such things instead of having the villainess just untalented at martial arts and whatnot
With that said! It's only chapter 1 and it's a pretty minor thing so I won't dwell on it any further