Matchmaking by the NEET at the Shrine - Oneshot

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lol maybe she should 'demand' something super luxurious as an offering. but assuming her powers 'worked', maybe she could've diffuse him with "So you want me to take her free will away and basically brainwash her into loving you?" because if praying to a god for your relationships to come true , other than romantic dreamer aspect, would come off as sleazy/underhanded to do if it's confirmed that gods are there.

(Tbh my first thought was how some ppl use the phrase 'pray the gay away' so other than 'pure wishes' at best it's selfish and at worse it's malicious but this is me overthinking a pointless one shot lol)
 
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Where meh twist? :unsure:
It does feel like it should be more but i feel like the cliche/predictable 'twist' would be him falling in love with the shrine god

or the girl showing up in front of him praying about another love or being like "I'd rather die than be cursed to go out with you" or so XD
 
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It feels super incomplete, but the premise is a very strong one, I feel. Done right, and it would definitely be a crowd pleaser
 
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What is this? Dude just ask the girl you like out. What were expecting? The Wizard of Oz? You want Shrine Lady to hand you a bottle of liquid courage?
 
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It's for the best that this remains a oneshot. If this doesn't end badly, it will just not end at all. cough book girls cough

Or just be another Fanbox porn ad. ...and what do you know, it is.

Random down bad reader: I don't like this arrogant goddess... I bet she's the one in heat! That's the twist!
Hamita: My Fanbox has exactly what you want to see.
 

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