May I Ask for One Final Thing? - Vol. 7 Ch. 35

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Thanks for the translations, these 2 chapters have been adorable!
That said, please have a proofreader give these a once over before you upload them, there are a lot of spelling/grammar errors.
Proofreading isn't an onerous task, i'm sure that there would be someone willing to do it for you.
 
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NEXT NEXT NEXT NTEX 😭
even thought i knew that prince personallity is jerk but i cant....
 
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I wasn't behind the ship for the entirety of this series up until now as I saw no way of it working well but this execution's surprisingly not bad
 
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Illegal cliffhangers but good food nonetheless tyty
Considering the length of the chapters and the length of the arc, it's kind of hard to not end in a cliffhanger. There's a continuous tension in the story, so cutting anywhere there creates some kind of cliffhanger.
 
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The people defending this and saying that this is ok is exactly the reason why dogwater garbage like this keeps on getting put out.

"Oh but it's free! You should be thankful"
I can give you a steaming pile of shit for free as well, you should be grateful. Free doesn't have to mean terrible.

"You can just ignore and not read it, no need to be an ass"
The so called "Translator" too can just ignore this series and not TL at all, assuming they're self aware about how low the quality they put out is. Ignoring this issue is the worst way to go about this, as this will keep on happening as we're already seeing right now. Imagine if this terrible TL goes on for years and in the end you find out you've been understanding things incorrectly and many of the nuances of the material were lost because you were being fed wrong or terrible translations.

"It's perfectly readable for me! I can just auto correct things in my head as I go"
So you've been stockholmed into this shit. If this is your definition of "perfect" then grammar and spelling books must be a sacred item for you. Also spending the extra effort and brain power to correct things instead of actually reading, understanding, and enjoying the material is not ideal.


Yeah I'm gonna be an ass about this. I've seen a lot of terrible quality scanlations over the years from ESLs without a proper grasp of English or worse, ESLs using MTL, and I've just about had it.
 
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It can't be that hard to find one person to proof read before releasing it can it?

I mean, thanks for the work, it's appreciated, but please find a proof reader. Hell I'll volunteer.
Respect that someone's actually willing to put themselves out there to make things better instead of being a whiny baby.
 
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That was surprisingly pretty darn sweet. Now I can't wait to see that other cunt's face twisting in displeasure. And then getting beat-up to a pulpe.
Thanks for the translation!
 
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this whole 3 pages of translation discourse made me remember the day i lazily randomly commented to obviously local mtled for simple word that kept awkwardly translated that made me questioning their knowledge of OWN mother language (im not saying this to them and yeah it was a really simple word that should be gone) and got berated by translators who argued that they! worked! hard! for these i should BE thankful for free things and should critics them politely instead not mocks them as amateur (it wasnt mockery, they were indeed one)

turns out the official local language translation that came out later also bad (better, but still bad) so i just seek official english hahah

anyway i still think the translation is okay (thanks again!!) but yeah im not english native so my okay is probably kind of low
 
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I appreciate your effort and hard-working; however please use grammarly next time 🥹
 
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Julius pretty much just wanted an excuse to fight to the death with her, eh? Quite a kinky boy for quite a kinky girl!
 
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OUR ROGUE PRINCESS CAN'T BE THIS CUTE 😭😭😭
you mean helpless damsel in distress who can't do anything that truly matters unless the big strong man does it for her, and she offers her body in return for it? Not "rogue princess".

This manga was kinda meh apart from how mc was constantly beating up everyone that irked her or tried to scheme, bulldozing through and traps. But then all the love interests started showing up where her fists somehow weren't the answer, making the manga as 'good' as its story. And now this stupid development :/
If you want an archetypical damsel in distress story, at least make the story good! rages impotently And preferably don't make the self-insert mc be the damsel, as a straight guy I don't like being made impotent and forced to offer my body to some other guy to survive!
god i wish that were me
you like being a spoiled jealous brat who is about to get punted to the afterlife when your charm magic and masterplan fails?
I want to enjoy this at its fullest, including the colored text, but my brain is focused too much on the spelling mistakes. What do I do? :nyoron:
I were reading it imagining that they were intentionally mispronouncing stuff in cutesy manners. Like ending words with "nyan" and the like.
 

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