......what? This is soft core porn
Its.....lame. Seriously? The guy didn't show any sort of excitement. The dudes either gay or superbly unrealistic. Scratch out the magic and creatures from dnd. You have a literal attractive woman whose undressing herself and SITTING ON YOUR CROTCH. Not one bit of excitement. Complete bullshit. Sure, comedy but add that he had a boner underneath. PLEASE AUTHORS. Add some realism
Another thing. Girl, you're trying to excite him. Why are you surprised of his 'erection'