Momose Akira no Hatsukoi Hatan-chuu. - Ch. 9 - Emotions Mid-jump

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Dude this is really just deku and toga just by art itself and now MC is really becoming deku by the number of injuries lmao
 
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On page 9, "What's making you try so hard?" is the correct English translation. You never use the past (tried) when the verb refers to an action that's happening.
 
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Once or twice leaving your commentary as "TL notes" is fine, but we don't need your live reaction through the entire chapter. Thanks for your work, but if you'd like to leave your thoughts save it for the credits page or these comment sections.

TL notes are supposed to be notes regarding the translation; hence TL notes.

Also, please find someone to proof read your work.
 

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