Momose Akira no Hatsukoi Hatan-chuu. - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Straight Ahead

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Is anyone else getting confused by the order of the text on the first two or three pages? Maybe I'm just sleepy
Definitely not the only one. Why did it go from right→left in page 1.
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to then change to left→right in page 2.
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This is what it turned into in my head
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Also that unnecessary comma bothers the hell out of me.
 
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the art is rad but whats with the "i did everything with this cute girl in elementary school... middle school happened and i stopped talking to her... high school happened i cant wait to talk to her again!" in so many manga
Puberty.

First her breasts grew and it scared him away because now she's different. Then his testicles grew and now he can't get enough of those breasts.
 
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This doesn’t even need the so called Potential since its already Perfect from the beginning…
 
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The intensity with which she asked for his favorite food made me think of Heath Ledger's Joker asking for his phone call at the lockup.
 

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