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It's apparent that the author originally just wrote one chapter at a time, without really thinkinh much, or at all.MC keeps noting how the guy would destroy the country if his kid died, my question is, how was MC planning to live his peaceful life in the boonies if he hadn't randomly saved the kid?
Seems like he didn't have a plan at all, just hoping that they'd not get crushed along with the rest of the country?
When you remove the stunning art, it's easy to notice that the overall story isn't exactly layered.