Moracmorac Crown Prince - Ch. 6

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Minor problem with the TL, the last line should end with an ellipses (...), because ending it with a question mark just makes it seem like granny is asking if they are guys.
 
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@Ohgodpleaseno Yeah, it did not register to me it could be read that way. I thought it was pretty clear on context.
better way to write that would have been "are you guys perchance be..." or "are you guys perhaps..."
 
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@citatel It was clear to me and I didn't notice it until I read the comments! But now I can't unsee. An ellipsis with an ending question mark could work too.
are you guys... ?

love this release - thank you!!
 
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Granny, for your own good, listen to this guy. Not because of them but because of the ones AFTER them
 

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