Moshi, Koi ga Mieta Nara - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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Such a cute series, if they don’t all three become a couple then I’d like the black shored girl to win

Her arrow is so STONG lol really matches her awkward but intimidating aura
 
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Damn, look at them holding hands in the water like that. This went from fluffy and cute to lewd as heck in a matter of seconds.
 
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This is such an amusing manga so far. If not a poly 3-way, then a harem would work too, haha. Love Fukatsu a biiiiiiiiit more than Sayu, though. 😂
 
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A strong force of yuri really wants them to stay together XDDD day and night!!! LOL I'm so lucky I found this the first day, thank you veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery much! looks so fun, and so far the 3 girls are really nice (Except her old childhood friend, what a stupid b- f.sd.. )

Hey did you all notice that that there's at least 3 kind of arrows? I wonder if that means how intense it is or what kind of "like" they have... Not sure how much thought the mangaka put into that but well, I won't waste time making assumptions so early XP
 
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is it just me or the translator made a mistake ?

why Sayo’s name become Sayu when MC call her name ?
i checked on the other translation, and her name doesn’t change into Sayu

also, i think the font size is a little too big ? tbh, its kinda annoying when there’re too much “-“ on each dialogue box.. and some text become inconsistent cuz the font size

hopefully you can fix it if you decide to continue this manga translation
 
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Damn, well. Removed the "proofread" from last page. All issues except font (should) have been fixed. I hope, if any good comes from these mistakes, it will motivate people with more than 1 week experience to pick this up. Sorry, again.
 
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@AlexEliot I thought it was great overall, mistakes can happen with experience too so please don't be sorry.
Also I thought the font size was fine considering they fit very well inside the bubbles, it would be weird if there's too much empty space and if I read it in my phone is even better.
 
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@AlexEliot hey, it wasn’t bad at all, I really appreciate your translation.

The manga is also really promising, I can’t wait to keep reading it.
 
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This looks like it’s gonna be good. The art style is cute and the plot is something interesting I’ve only seen once before. So far, I like all the characters so I really want a polyamory ending. The translation seemed off in a few places and there was some dialogue I didn’t quite understand, so I hope that improves in the future.
 

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