i think this version is much clearer and easier to read
not gonna saying the other tl team is bad, but tbh i like this version more. i just hope the other tl team also can learn from this tl team, not bashing them just because they look like wanna trying to take your work.
well, i don’t mind if you continue to translate this series. i’d like to see both tl teams works, and might be better if they can work together.