Moumoku no Koushaku Reijou ni Tensei Shimashita - Vol. 2 Ch. 9

[Odious1]

Ew... this is the route the author's gonna go, huh? He made the mc an easily manipulate ijit... haaa😮‍💨. Why she's jumping to conclusions could be manipulation through some means (potion, magic, who knows), but her even having those emotions in the first place is the problem. Why is she listening to her like her word actually means something? If this were me, the second he came in I woulda sat down and explained the conversation I just had, because the conversation was weird to begin with. It was forceful and out of place. That's the first conversation (the first words, at all) she has with me? It's weird. Whatevz. Let's see how easily it gets resolved, or if it gets worse and worse by madeup situations piling up. if it's easily resolved, this'll still be worth reading. If it goes the other route, nope, the writing would be far too childish for my taste.

 

[Darkshade13]

Seriously, this is so poorly written it hurts. The author writes themselves into a corner and then just brute forces out of it with predictable, cliched tropes even if they make absolutely zero sense given how the story is going. It feels like it's written with no plans, no forethought, no revision, and yet has a checklist of every standard isekai/reincarnator story trope that they feel compelled to hit no matter how ill-fitting they are.

It's not surprising at all that this apparently dies a death in like 5 more chapters.