Mozuya-san Goes on a Rampage - Vol. 10 Ch. 57 - Mozuya-san Goes on a Rampage

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Image 17, "various voodoos" should be something like "various voodoo spells/magic" and "less portion" should be "smaller portions."

Image 21, "fae" should be "face," I assume.

Image 28, I think "every last one of the people who are by my side is trash" should match the verbs (both "is" or both "are"). Also, if Mozuya's insults just before that for Misao and Tatsuki should be roughly equally rude, I'd suggest "homo" or something else less harsh than "faggot."

Image 29, "where I'm truly happy" should be "where I've been truly happy" or "where I was truly happy."
 
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Wait, 1 ch left?
That's pretty bad, the story is actually really good...
 
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@Djisas Mozuya is beating Kabashima with a crowbar pretty sure its the equivalent of a confession for her.

Definitely a W for Kabashima if you ask me, its the beating he's been waiting for.
 
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Title drop, woo.
Looks like it'll be a relatively neat conclusion, even with all the various threads hanging about.
Can't wait!
 
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This seems a little more severe than her usual flirty violence. Hope she doesn't straight up murder the guy.
 

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