Mr. Clice - Vol. 4 Ch. 15 - Mega City Panic

[MangaDex]

 

[geistchevalier]

Thanks for translating

 

[Fugutron]

They totally forgot Clice was bulletproof lol,

 

[renseiryuu]

They totally forgot Clice was bulletproof lol,

Actually, by chapter 4, the bulletproofing effect is already gone. Seems like she's pretty much a normal person by now (other than the plot armor XD).

 

[1234muse]

Woo! Also jeez are we sure they’re the good guys

 

[renseiryuu]

Woo! Also jeez are we sure they’re the good guys

IMO, with this series, it's not a matter of which one is the good guys, but which one is worse XD

 

[Benjansss]

Thanks, theres a few places where the grammars off or words in sentences are in a weird order, it could do with a second proof read next time. Nothing major though definitely understandable

 

[mendics]

I was just thinking about this recently, im honestly surprised how fast you were able to upload this after the past chapters. Thank you!

 

[renseiryuu]

Thanks, theres a few places where the grammars off or words in sentences are in a weird order, it could do with a second proof read next time. Nothing major though definitely understandable

Ah, can you please inform me which part? I could try and fix them (it's also so I could learn from my mistake and not making it in the future release). Tbh, we did try to proof read it, but with only 2 of us (and my friend being practically a part timer here), there were only so much we could cover.

And I assure you, I did try my best to keep the lines understandable and flow from one to the next. But admittedly I'm just one guy and making mistakes is all too easy to do XD.

 

[1234muse]

IMO, with this series, it's not a matter of which one is the good guys, but which one is worse XD

it's a joke...

 

[renseiryuu]

it's a joke...

Oh no, I thought I was responding to the joke by saying what I said. Sorry if it sounds otherwise!

 

[Benjansss]

Ah, can you please inform me which part? I could try and fix them (it's also so I could learn from my mistake and not making it in the future release). Tbh, we did try to proof read it, but with only 2 of us (and my friend being practically a part timer here), there were only so much we could cover.

And I assure you, I did try my best to keep the lines understandable and flow from one to the next. But admittedly I'm just one guy and making mistakes is all too easy to do XD.

Hi, sorry for the late reply.

first let me reiterate these are minor mistakes and it’s still completely understandable. Most mistakes seem to be in regards to past vs present tense, missing a’s, missing or inappropriate s’s, and other singular missing words.

starting pg 8, this is an easy mistake and not technically wrong, but a little off “on the afternoon flight“ rather then “in The afternoon flight”.Also “the lives of the almost 30000 people here” instead of “the lives of almost 30000 people here.

pg 9, “call” instead of “called“ as it’s present not past tense.

pg 10, “feel“ rather then “felt“, present rather then past tense. Instead of “got the money” “get the money” or “had the money“ makes more sense. ”in the red” instead of “in red”.“National deficit“ instead of “nation“, or “nation‘s deficit” also works. “Still have over” instead of “still got over”.

pg 13, “coming out” rather then “come out“ present vs future tense

pg 14, ”Im not doing what your ordering” or “I’m not doing what your ordering me to do” instead of “Im not doing what your ordering me”

pg 15, ”it sure is good to be in a high position“ instead of “ it sure is good to be in high position

pg 17, “excellence has“ instead of “excellence have”. “My apologies” rather than “apology”. “to your operative” instead of “of your operative“. “As a counter terrorism measure” instead of “a measure of counter terrorism” would make more sense.

pg 18, “there is” instead of “there are”. ”there is more to mega city’s” instead of “there is more to mega city”. “These headquarters“ instead of “this headquarters“. “both a“ instead of just “both”. “We take pride” instead of “we took pride” past vs present tense. “in it” instead of “on it”. just ”interpol‘s“ instead of “the interpol’s”. Either ” A specific region“ or “specific regions” instead of “specific region”.

pg 19, “world is racing” instead of “ world are racing”. “Break out attempts” instead of “break out attempt”. “They open fire” instead of “it open fire” as there more then one turret. “modules” instead of module. “React” instead of “reacts”.

pg 20, “step” instead of “stepped” future not past tense. “Out of here” instead of “out here”

pg 21, “didn‘t bellamaccia” instead of “does bellamaccia”. “Already knows“ instead of “already know”. “Seriously board” instead of “seriously went onboard”.

pg 22, “face has he got” instead of “face we got”. ”on a public” instead of “on public“. “Guard tried” instead of “guard trying” past vs present tense. “why did I” instead of “why do I” past vs present tense. Intel” instead of “intels”.

pg 25, “primarily detects” instead of “primarily detect”.

pg 26, “still can” instead of “still could” past vs present tense

pg 28, “not only is he” instead of “not only he’s”. “Also keeps” instead of “also kept” past vs present tense. “One things” instead of ”one thing”. “Boss will never” instead of “boss would never”.

pg 29, “been at” instead of “been in”. “Back at the airport“ instead of “back in the airport“

pg 30, “they are already” instead of “they were already” past vs present tense.
“Department are they a part of” instead of “department they’re a part of”

pg 33, “would prevent memory“ instead of “would prevents memory“. “System prevents them” instead of “system prevented them”. “Making them” instead of “make them”

pg 34, “and be planning” instead of “and planning”

pg 38, “programs” instead of “program”. “Shoot at me” instead of “shot at me”.

pg 42, “emergencies” instead of “emergency“

pg 44, “not a malfunction“ instead of “not malfunction“. “With uniforms” instead of “with uniform”

pg 45, ”boss gets away” instead of ”boss got away”

pg 48, “ends of the earth” instead of “end of the earth”

pg 51, “why do” instead of “why does”. “Call karma” instead of “called karma”. “Asked for more help” instead of “asked for another help”

 

[renseiryuu]

@Benjansss
pg8 “the lives of the almost 30000 people here” instead of “the lives of almost 30000 people here. -> Wait, didn't I use "the lives of over 300,000 people here are safe now" instead?

pg 14, ”Im not doing what your ordering” or “I’m not doing what your ordering me to do” instead of “Im not doing what your ordering me” -> I think the old one is already correct, but I'll take your 2nd suggestion here!

pg 18,
“These headquarters“ instead of “this headquarters“. -> In here there's only one location, right? Shouldn't I keep using "this" instead?

pg 20, “Out of here” instead of “out here” -> I can't believe i missed this even though I read it as such XD.

pg 21, “didn‘t bellamaccia” instead of “does bellamaccia”. -> Aish, I should have write it as "mustache" and not "beard", since ヒゲ can mean both. Sorry, I'll fix it as "mustache" instead, and thus still using "does".

The rest has been fixed as you suggested.

Anyway, I'm really thankful that you took the time to list all these! It will be soon be updated. I've just recently finished chapter 16 (currently being proofread by my friend), but now seeing this I've realized I have got a bit ahead of myself XD. Hopefully I could eliminate or at least reduce the amount of these kind of mistakes in the future (it might be minor as you said, but gotta strive to be better!). Please look forward to the next chapter!

 

[Terrate]

Damn, extra guards get shot and dies. Villain gets hit with a seeking missile pointblank and lives.

 

[Benjansss]

@Benjansss
pg8 “the lives of the almost 30000 people here” instead of “the lives of almost 30000 people here. -> Wait, didn't I use "the lives of over 300,000 people here are safe now" instead?

pg 14, ”Im not doing what your ordering” or “I’m not doing what your ordering me to do” instead of “Im not doing what your ordering me” -> I think the old one is already correct, but I'll take your 2nd suggestion here!

pg 18,
“These headquarters“ instead of “this headquarters“. -> In here there's only one location, right? Shouldn't I keep using "this" instead?

pg 20, “Out of here” instead of “out here” -> I can't believe i missed this even though I read it as such XD.

pg 21, “didn‘t bellamaccia” instead of “does bellamaccia”. -> Aish, I should have write it as "mustache" and not "beard", since ヒゲ can mean both. Sorry, I'll fix it as "mustache" instead, and thus still using "does".

The rest has been fixed as you suggested.

Anyway, I'm really thankful that you took the time to list all these! It will be soon be updated. I've just recently finished chapter 16 (currently being proofread by my friend), but now seeing this I've realized I have got a bit ahead of myself XD. Hopefully I could eliminate or at least reduce the amount of these kind of mistakes in the future (it might be minor as you said, but gotta strive to be better!). Please look forward to the next chapter!

pg 8, in retrospect I over complicated it, just switching the words “now” and “safe” around (so it reads “are now safe” will make it flow better.

the thing with page 18, is more of a quirk of English then anything else. Yes it’s a singular place but because headquarters ends with an s making it sound like a plural (even though it’s not necessarily a plural) that is what people would normally say. This is not a common thing and i cant think of any other similar situations off the top of my head.

thanks again for your hard work and I look forward to your next release.

 

[renseiryuu]

Damn, extra guards get shot and dies. Villain gets hit with a seeking missile pointblank and lives.

Don't worry, they'll live. Those are all tranquilizer shots. How do I know?......................Trust me, bro/sis. XD

pg 8, in retrospect I over complicated it, just switching the words “now” and “safe” around (so it reads “are now safe” will make it flow better.

the thing with page 18, is more of a quirk of English then anything else. Yes it’s a singular place but because headquarters ends with an s making it sound like a plural (even though it’s not necessarily a plural) that is what people would normally say. This is not a common thing and i cant think of any other similar situations off the top of my head.

thanks again for your hard work and I look forward to your next release.

Tbh, I still feel the part with pg8 flows better with "safe now" instead of "now safe". But then again, I think it's also fine this way, so might as well. Fixed pg 18 as well. Thanks again!

 

[AncientWatcher]

The chief hitting an exploding gold ball is comeuppance for all the crap he's put Clice through.

 

[vigorousjammer]

@renseiryuu Hey, not sure if this is something that you guys are willing to adjust, but... According to Shonen Jump's website, the official chapter listing places this chapter, "Mega City Panic" as chapter 14, with vol 3 being broken up into four parts (chapters 10-13).

Source: https://shonenjumpplus.com/episode/10834108156635984208

You can see it in the thumbnails on the page:

The thumbnails for Chapters 10, 11, 12, and 13 all match pages from Miami Flight 2001, while the thumbnail for chapter 14 matches this page from Mega City Panic:

Thus, the chapter numbering for all scanlated chapters after chapter 13 is one higher than it should be according to the official numbering.
I think it would be nice to update the chapter numbering to match the official numbering, but not sure how you would go about it, or if you want to do so.

 

[renseiryuu]

@renseiryuu Hey, not sure if this is something that you guys are willing to adjust, but... According to Shonen Jump's website, the official chapter listing places this chapter, "Mega City Panic" as chapter 14, with vol 3 being broken up into four parts (chapters 10-13).

Source: https://shonenjumpplus.com/episode/10834108156635984208

You can see it in the thumbnails on the page:

The thumbnails for Chapters 10, 11, 12, and 13 all match pages from Miami Flight 2001, while the thumbnail for chapter 14 matches this page from Mega City Panic:

Thus, the chapter numbering for all scanlated chapters after chapter 13 is one higher than it should be according to the official numbering.
I think it would be nice to update the chapter numbering to match the official numbering, but not sure how you would go about it, or if you want to do so.

Wow, I didn't know there's a raw in there as well XD. Thanks for the info, @vigorousjammer.

I guess it's my mistake, since during Miami Flight arc (the entirety of volume 3), there's no clear indication of the chapter break. It's basically one long chapter. And since I didn't check the raw in the site you just shared, I decided to break the chapter myself, in a way that I think is best to separate them.

I'll discuss it first with Lardagus. Personally I don't mind fixing it, but might take time for not much gain.

 

[Lardagus]

@renseiryuu Hey, not sure if this is something that you guys are willing to adjust, but... According to Shonen Jump's website, the official chapter listing places this chapter, "Mega City Panic" as chapter 14, with vol 3 being broken up into four parts (chapters 10-13).

Thus, the chapter numbering for all scanlated chapters after chapter 13 is one higher than it should be according to the official numbering.
I think it would be nice to update the chapter numbering to match the official numbering, but not sure how you would go about it, or if you want to do so.

I debated internally about this for all of 5 minutes, as technically the entire Miami Flight 2001 arc is "one" chapter (in the books we are using, the 2017 release, it's split up into something crazy like 14 parts).
For now, I think we can splice a chapter together and renumber to remain consistent with the website, but I plan on eventually going back and redoing all the older chapters with the book raws. That may cause some changes then, but that's not going to be for a while.
But yeah, we can fix the numbering.