this was one of the most awful things i have ever had the displeasure of reading, i cannot believe i spent so much time reading this. it pains me that i spent even a second reading this. i couldn't stop myself though, i was fully aware of the suffering i was going through.
it was like i was a frog, boiled alive at the author's sheer fearlessness for writing such a thing. the pacing was off, the ending didn't make sense. the character's never developed! i sat through all of it and for what? nothing.
i really would not ever in a million years recommend this story. none of it makes any sense whatsoever and i feel as though there is much to be said on the pacing. it really was awful.
if this could be used as an example as for how not to write i think it would be very educational.