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Yes I have never read the webnovel version of this and probably never will. I don't read we novel.

If acting like a douchebag is a story foreshadowing then it's probably a dark story. If this is indeed a dark story there should not be so many comedy relief characters that's just poor execution. Beyond that the artist they choose cant do dark theme with this artstyle. It just looks amateur edgy fantasy although it's not really author's fault but it's still a decisional mistake.

Finally if the story is dark in a John Wick kind rather than tragic dark story kind, this is still trash. Because then the author wrote whatever at first then sees and welded everything together.


Yah no. You're wrong on all ur posts unfortunately based on how far i've read up to chapter 200 on novel, which is fortunate as that means by reverse of your statement its actually a good story which it is. I haven't seen any plot holes in the manhwa that aren't explained in the future. The genderbent honestly imo feels rather irrelevant to the story, everyone treats him as male. If you're reading it for the genderbent to anyone reading this, this is not your story. The Mc is very much a "male" character that just happens to be a magical girl and he's definately not a douchebag, rough sure. You're definately just reading this wrong and interpreting things incorrectly. Its a story with solid world building filled and depresion, the mc goes through a lot of suffering in the past and will continue to do so in the future chapters ahead. It is a tragic dark story. One critical issue I've seen others and you do is straight up misunderstand why he's doing things the way he is when he's "bullying" the younger generation and the manhwa is straight up just lacking chapters to get there, but everything is explained later better. TBH i think the manhwa just kind of fked up in explaining it and made people think the MC is just some edgy lunatic guy trying to lash out at society. But its kinda already interpretable his reasons in the recent manhwa chapters once you look at the bigger picture. He's realized that this society is unsustainable in the future. His idea of hero is not the same as societies current verison of a hero. When his friend dies, he's sure pissed at the lunatic that killed him, but he's even more pissed is how people profit off his death through politics or money and people are just there to use his legacy for their own means. He isn't there to bullying younger generation because he thinks they haven't "suffered" like them, the older generation, its cuz when the older generation finally retires/dies due to old age or just dying in combat and humanity is left with this weaker generation of fame/money hungry heroes than humanity is utterly fked because the peace is only temporary, it only takes 1 fk up to end humanity cuz 1 O class can and will wipe out humanity. Its not like O class (strongest monsters that danger humanity) just disappear when old generation disappears. A bunch of streamer and clout chaser heroes will never be able to defend humanity. Its pretty wide difference when you compare a generation of heroes that fought for humanity and for the strength to defend humanity, even while hated by most of society and then this new generation that is only there to become famous and make money while never striving to prepare themselves for when the inevitable danger occurs.

Though, I want to note the story is not all about just beating up the younger generation and so forth, I honestly would say it is a very small part of it, like where the manhwa is currently it will basically never happens again actually. He probably beats up his mascot more often if anything lol (very small spoiler if u want generally get whats going on in the future chapters of manhwa realistically based on novel) mc decides to tackle this issue in a new and more interesting way by creating an opposing hero association to challenge the current one in the ideals of heroes needing to be stronger and not doing this just a for a paycheck. Also I'd say that most of the future chapters are learning more about the other S rank heroes pasts, the sins the old generation of heroes have done to create this "world of peace", and training the two students + some more stuff. The path to humanity's very shaky peace is filled with the sins of the past the older generation heroes have made to create it. It has really interesting world building that actually go into how this peace was created and the suffering and sins along the way to make it occur. Something I rarely see happen in "gate" novels or whatever, as somehow the hunter/whatever association just kinda magically "works" and pops up and the current governments of the world are just somehow chill with it and 0 politics occur. As most of time the "association" is an existing structure before the MC got his powers or the MC was never apart of the general creation. They usually just insert the association into modern japan/korea and it just "works" somehow, its shallow.


"ay at first I thought the intention behind the attacks was to cripple the hero association so civilian has to take it upon themselves to protect themselves but get devastated in process. Sort of like a more logical version of "Hero Has Returned"."

Its never the Mc intention to cause civilian harm. Civilians already know they're incapable of defending themselves without heroes already. He's also very much not going to attack his own friends and very much incapable of doing so. He is not some OP Mc capable fighting the rest of the association.


"Also to why there are no power/authority imposing heroes is crossed out because apparently heroes become heroes with stories. So there are dumba**es on streaming platform but there is no one with a backbone to just hunt down the anti-hero fanatic or to oppose the nonsensical no kill civilian policy not even in self defense."

Its explained already in the manhwa first off they think the anti-hero is a really strong doppelganger monster, second off its already given a story to the MC's student, thus only she can kill it without causing a hole that will ever spawns monsters. So this is why nobody can go kill it. This is already explained extremely early on. So this statement doesnt make sense.


As for him being edgy or john wick. I wouldnt worry, he is very not much John Wick or edgy at all. The older generation is just severally depressed and full of PTSD from the events of past 30 years for pretty valid reasons, they fully go back into lot of character backstory and so forth. I haven't read anything even remotely close to aura farming or edgy at all up to chapter 200. I'd say the world building has got more interesting if anything. Stuff like why mc isn't more well known if he's one of the original heroes and so forth plot holes are all explained in the future. I'd say give it 10-20 chapters for it to be explained soon enough.

Also other person saying its stain arc, its definitely not a stain arc. This character is written so much better than that trash character. Stain is a psycho with 5 year old tinted rose glasses that thinks he deserve to execute justice, while also having 0 understanding of how society works. MC is a 30 year old Vet that knows exactly how fked the world is, contributed to the changes and peace of the world, and then only realizes that things needs to be changed for humanity to stand any chance once the "old guard" dies out or humanity is going get wiped out. They're just drastically two different characters.
 
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For other people reading this. I would recommend you look at Sareza's first part of the review (not the one that contains spoilers unless u want read that version) of the novel version for generally what the story is about, to get expectation on the story and whats to come. Its a really solid review that explains rather well how the story is, the others one are reviews that have only read too few chapters to actually understand what the story is actually about.

https://www.novelupdates.com/series/mr-magical-girl/
 
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Yah no. You're wrong on all ur posts unfortunately based on how far i've read up to chapter 200 on novel, which is fortunate as that means by reverse of your statement its actually a good story which it is. I haven't seen any plot holes in the manhwa that aren't explained in the future. The genderbent honestly imo feels rather irrelevant to the story, everyone treats him as male. If you're reading it for the genderbent to anyone reading this, this is not your story. The Mc is very much a "male" character that just happens to be a magical girl and he's definately not a douchebag, rough sure. You're definately just reading this wrong and interpreting things incorrectly. Its a story with solid world building filled and depresion, the mc goes through a lot of suffering in the past and will continue to do so in the future chapters ahead. It is a tragic dark story. One critical issue I've seen others and you do is straight up misunderstand why he's doing things the way he is when he's "bullying" the younger generation and the manhwa is straight up just lacking chapters to get there, but everything is explained later better. TBH i think the manhwa just kind of fked up in explaining it and made people think the MC is just some edgy lunatic guy trying to lash out at society. But its kinda already interpretable his reasons in the recent manhwa chapters once you look at the bigger picture. He's realized that this society is unsustainable in the future. His idea of hero is not the same as societies current verison of a hero. When his friend dies, he's sure pissed at the lunatic that killed him, but he's even more pissed is how people profit off his death through politics or money and people are just there to use his legacy for their own means. He isn't there to bullying younger generation because he thinks they haven't "suffered" like them, the older generation, its cuz when the older generation finally retires/dies due to old age or just dying in combat and humanity is left with this weaker generation of fame/money hungry heroes than humanity is utterly fked because the peace is only temporary, it only takes 1 fk up to end humanity cuz 1 O class can and will wipe out humanity. Its not like O class (strongest monsters that danger humanity) just disappear when old generation disappears. A bunch of streamer and clout chaser heroes will never be able to defend humanity. Its pretty wide difference when you compare a generation of heroes that fought for humanity and for the strength to defend humanity, even while hated by most of society and then this new generation that is only there to become famous and make money while never striving to prepare themselves for when the inevitable danger occurs.

Though, I want to note the story is not all about just beating up the younger generation and so forth, I honestly would say it is a very small part of it, like where the manhwa is currently it will basically never happens again actually. He probably beats up his mascot more often if anything lol (very small spoiler if u want generally get whats going on in the future chapters of manhwa realistically based on novel) mc decides to tackle this issue in a new and more interesting way by creating an opposing hero association to challenge the current one in the ideals of heroes needing to be stronger and not doing this just a for a paycheck. Also I'd say that most of the future chapters are learning more about the other S rank heroes pasts, the sins the old generation of heroes have done to create this "world of peace", and training the two students + some more stuff. The path to humanity's very shaky peace is filled with the sins of the past the older generation heroes have made to create it. It has really interesting world building that actually go into how this peace was created and the suffering and sins along the way to make it occur. Something I rarely see happen in "gate" novels or whatever, as somehow the hunter/whatever association just kinda magically "works" and pops up and the current governments of the world are just somehow chill with it and 0 politics occur. As most of time the "association" is an existing structure before the MC got his powers or the MC was never apart of the general creation. They usually just insert the association into modern japan/korea and it just "works" somehow, its shallow.


"ay at first I thought the intention behind the attacks was to cripple the hero association so civilian has to take it upon themselves to protect themselves but get devastated in process. Sort of like a more logical version of "Hero Has Returned"."

Its never the Mc intention to cause civilian harm. Civilians already know they're incapable of defending themselves without heroes already. He's also very much not going to attack his own friends and very much incapable of doing so. He is not some OP Mc capable fighting the rest of the association.


"Also to why there are no power/authority imposing heroes is crossed out because apparently heroes become heroes with stories. So there are dumba**es on streaming platform but there is no one with a backbone to just hunt down the anti-hero fanatic or to oppose the nonsensical no kill civilian policy not even in self defense."

Its explained already in the manhwa first off they think the anti-hero is a really strong doppelganger monster, second off its already given a story to the MC's student, thus only she can kill it without causing a hole that will ever spawns monsters. So this is why nobody can go kill it. This is already explained extremely early on. So this statement doesnt make sense.


As for him being edgy or john wick. I wouldnt worry, he is very not much John Wick or edgy at all. The older generation is just severally depressed and full of PTSD from the events of past 30 years for pretty valid reasons, they fully go back into lot of character backstory and so forth. I haven't read anything even remotely close to aura farming or edgy at all up to chapter 200. I'd say the world building has got more interesting if anything. Stuff like why mc isn't more well known if he's one of the original heroes and so forth plot holes are all explained in the future. I'd say give it 10-20 chapters for it to be explained soon enough.

Also other person saying its stain arc, its definitely not a stain arc. This character is written so much better than that trash character. Stain is a psycho with 5 year old tinted rose glasses that thinks he deserve to execute justice, while also having 0 understanding of how society works. MC is a 30 year old Vet that knows exactly how fked the world is, contributed to the changes and peace of the world, and then only realizes that things needs to be changed for humanity to stand any chance once the "old guard" dies out or humanity is going get wiped out. They're just drastically two different characters.
What you have said is something I expected from the story when I started reading it, but soon was disappointed. Maybe if the manhwa pans out as you say maybe it would go in that route but I don't really have any hope for it.

What I assume the author wanted to do in the 1st arc is to present a morally grey character which leaves you in suspense as to why he is doing such acts and gradually revealing it which gives light to his actions.

Now maybe the author did that well in webnovel I don't know, but what was done in this manhwa is abysmal. As I said the artstyle and how the association and Monsters are presented along with comedy relief ruins the grimy and dark tone of the story. It's like the story itself is mocking me for taking it seriously.

"TBH i think the manhwa just kind of fked up in explaining it and made people think the MC is just some edgy lunatic guy trying to lash out at society. But its kinda already interpretable his reasons in the recent manhwa chapters once you look at the bigger picture." I don't think there's any direction to interpret like at all. The manga did such a ass job at plot setting that you can interpret whatever and it would still make sense. Why? Because the manhwa still didn't lay any solid foundation as to where the story is going.

I would really take a bash at "gate" as they are the forefathers of foreign society mixing with current world stereotypes. Before that everybody wrote society replacing stories. So gate is the predecessor of every Isekai, tower, world syncro, or people gaining conceptual power(yes even this story) in anime format. It's like shutting on Doom original for not having free mouse. Forefathers always become dated.

Overall I believe now that this Manga has poor execution overall, and with how it's going, I don't believe it will improve.
 
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What you have said is something I expected from the story when I started reading it, but soon was disappointed. Maybe if the manhwa pans out as you say maybe it would go in that route but I don't really have any hope for it.

What I assume the author wanted to do in the 1st arc is to present a morally grey character which leaves you in suspense as to why he is doing such acts and gradually revealing it which gives light to his actions.

Now maybe the author did that well in webnovel I don't know, but what was done in this manhwa is abysmal. As I said the artstyle and how the association and Monsters are presented along with comedy relief ruins the grimy and dark tone of the story. It's like the story itself is mocking me for taking it seriously.

"TBH i think the manhwa just kind of fked up in explaining it and made people think the MC is just some edgy lunatic guy trying to lash out at society. But its kinda already interpretable his reasons in the recent manhwa chapters once you look at the bigger picture." I don't think there's any direction to interpret like at all. The manga did such a ass job at plot setting that you can interpret whatever and it would still make sense. Why? Because the manhwa still didn't lay any solid foundation as to where the story is going.

I would really take a bash at "gate" as they are the forefathers of foreign society mixing with current world stereotypes. Before that everybody wrote society replacing stories. So gate is the predecessor of every Isekai, tower, world syncro, or people gaining conceptual power(yes even this story) in anime format. It's like shutting on Doom original for not having free mouse. Forefathers always become dated.

Overall I believe now that this Manga has poor execution overall, and with how it's going, I don't believe it will improve.
Understandable honestly. I think the manga will and has struggle to actually articulate the story and depth the novel has which is understandable the medium I think doesn't convey depth as well to be honest. It takes really good work to do so. I will say that the monsters will be presented in a more serious matter likely in the future. I personally think they trolled the beginning readesr on purpose by making them gag characters, cuz they're seriously not in the future. (I'll put spoiler if u want understand what I mean)
We get backstory on various monsters and years ago when they entered Earth and find out many of the people in the monsters association are actually O class monsters that can legit end humanity. But why dont they I thought all O class = end of humanity? Ends up not all O monsters are in it to wipe humanity out, some are the "best and last of their race" and are forced by a higher entity controlling these "stories" to enter Earth. It be like if Earth was destroyed and MC was last one, the story would force MC to be an O class monster for another society. The squid comic gag character is actually an O class monster that is kinda of a menace. The rat treasury guy who got brain damage. Super assassin rat based on concept of rat swarms and exists in all human shadows in existence at all time meaning he cannot really die as long as there is a human shadow and can attack you at anytime if you have a human shadow. The current chapter 200ish its like at least 5-7 major arcs out is MC and the mindflayey/squid in the outer world on a outerversal train together as they are traveling to the Kingdom of Magic to meet the Queen of Magic. The train is interesting, as its a safe haven created by the mindflayer's planet for all "monsters/races" that had their planet destroyed. It was meant to be a place for people to gather and slowly get revenge on person who made the stories, but it became corrupted as people on train got content and slowly created a corrupt society where strength doesnt matter and it became all about nepotism and popularity, where the train crew are actively trying to kill new comers to maintain their lavish lifestyle ignoring the outside world. I explained it rather poorly as I'm not deep into that arc yet so there might be more, but its meant to represent the potential future Earth is going down with these new heroes and the way things are going down on Earth currently.


I can't really judge the manhwa currently as I still think personally its in the ass part of the story and about to enter the actually interesting part after this battle ends in the ocean. If they fail on the next arc I think I'll agree with ur opinion, but I guess I'll have wait couple months and see how they adapt it.
 
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Understandable honestly. I think the manga will and has struggle to actually articulate the story and depth the novel has which is understandable the medium I think doesn't convey depth as well to be honest. It takes really good work to do so. I will say that the monsters will be presented in a more serious matter likely in the future. I personally think they trolled the beginning readesr on purpose by making them gag characters, cuz they're seriously not in the future. (I'll put spoiler if u want understand what I mean)
We get backstory on various monsters and years ago when they entered Earth and find out many of the people in the monsters association are actually O class monsters that can legit end humanity. But why dont they I thought all O class = end of humanity? Ends up not all O monsters are in it to wipe humanity out, some are the "best and last of their race" and are forced by a higher entity controlling these "stories" to enter Earth. It be like if Earth was destroyed and MC was last one, the story would force MC to be an O class monster for another society. The squid comic gag character is actually an O class monster that is kinda of a menace. The rat treasury guy who got brain damage. Super assassin rat based on concept of rat swarms and exists in all human shadows in existence at all time meaning he cannot really die as long as there is a human shadow and can attack you at anytime if you have a human shadow. The current chapter 200ish its like at least 5-7 major arcs out is MC and the mindflayey/squid in the outer world on a outerversal train together as they are traveling to the Kingdom of Magic to meet the Queen of Magic. The train is interesting, as its a safe haven created by the mindflayer's planet for all "monsters/races" that had their planet destroyed. It was meant to be a place for people to gather and slowly get revenge on person who made the stories, but it became corrupted as people on train got content and slowly created a corrupt society where strength doesnt matter and it became all about nepotism and popularity, where the train crew are actively trying to kill new comers to maintain their lavish lifestyle ignoring the outside world. I explained it rather poorly as I'm not deep into that arc yet so there might be more, but its meant to represent the potential future Earth is going down with these new heroes and the way things are going down on Earth currently.


I can't really judge the manhwa currently as I still think personally its in the ass part of the story and about to enter the actually interesting part after this battle ends in the ocean. If they fail on the next arc I think I'll agree with ur opinion, but I guess I'll have wait couple months and see how they adapt it.
Knock me again in a couple of months and say if it became good or stayed bad. As I'm reading the spoiler I felt the combination of Omniscient Reader and some Project Moon setting,and I like both of their world building. As I said I saw potential from this author's writing and that's why I'm equally disappointed how it's going.

Maybe we are in that era of manga for Korean manhwas where editor/higher ups don't let the story go as the author intended rather try to force the manhwa to be what they think would sell.


Korean stuff suffers a lot during this media changes. My most disappointing media change in terms of Korean story was Sweet Home manhwa to the live action series.
 
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Man this comment section needs a TLDR notice, people are writing full essays over here💀
 
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TBH I was kinda disappointed. I get it that he's living a double life, being a hero while also cosplaying as a Monster :huh: . But instead of making his motive like a clouded mystery. Like why is he doing this? How the UN would react? The Monster side too.
But instead he just straight up telling the pink girl and the sniper one that, yeah, I don't kill, I want to teach these heroes.
The f bro ? You can just play it more edgy (I know :huh: ), He can just pretending to almost kill them but leave them off the last sec, it's like playing with his food. Don't just tell ppl that you don't KILL while you ARE A MONSTER !!
Now the other heroes also know what your motive are. Then what's the suspension ?
I hate to compare because these mangas/manhwas whatever, because different tastes suit different ppl. But a kinda similar version of this is https://mangadex.org/title/77bee52c-d2d6-44ad-a33a-1734c1fe696a/kage-no-jitsuryokusha-ni-naritakute
But this MC is just Fck around and Find out
 

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