Mujintou de Elf to Kyoudou Seikatsu

[draxdeveloper]

Don't know why it has such a low rating tbh. This novel is a realistic rendition on what would happen if dungeons started appearing, and from a unique perspective at that. I like how even the weakest of monsters are considered threats if taken by surprise, not dealt with adequately, etc. It's not just some magic go boom story. The political aspect is also very nice and portrays actual possibilities. The cons I can mention at this point in the story are the lack of character background/depth (barely mentions their lives/occupations prior to the beginning), slow progression in terms of MC's power, this annoys me because the first thing is would do in such a situation is consolidate enough strength to adequately protect myself from anymore unexpected situations. The art quality is also pretty meh but this is not a big problem to me. Overall this is something fresh and I am curious to see how the story progresses.

The first two chapters have a lot of writting issues, it's get better later?

 

[DivineLLoyd]

Her feeding the potion to that sh*t head and then blushing afterwards really threw me off and what the mc just gets a kiss on the cheek???now I wanna drop it. Apparently in WN she just poured the potion on that guy and that was it, feels like this artist has some freaky ntr fantasies