The idea in the first chapter was pretty good, introducing a fake mc that turns out to just be a side character that gets killed, pretty fresh but like the execution in the later chapter is wack i guess?
You could somehow explain that this was just because of his personality but
"My missing sense of smell was not the price i paid for my talent, it was a condition i was born with"
why the fuck did he bring that up, what made him bring that up? If he knows that she realised he doesn't have a sense of smell isn't that already weird enough? Like c'mon, dude doesn't even do shit with that
Edit: oh so he brought that up just because they're friends and he thought she read his mind anyway but that wouldn't explain why he said that to begin with