Musume Ni Danzai Sareru Akuyaku Koushaku Ni Tensei Shitemashita ~Akuyaku Muubu o Yameta no ni Nazeka Musume ga Koori No Reijou Ka Suru Ken~ - Ch. 1 -…

[finalm]

Yes I'm asking how the evil feudal lord managed to take over the kingdom when apparently they don't have any evil henchmen to actually facilitate this or help him remain in power. The game MC is the prince the evil feudal lord steals the throne from. You can't even argue that everyone under the MC's command must have been too stupid to understand what they were doing but can't rebel now to keep the kingdom intact because a rightful ruler exists to take back the throne. The people under the MC's command need to be evil or deeply loyal to the evil duke at the very least to get that far but we have been shown that is not the case. Real history has actual details to it so you can see how we get from point A to point B unlike this story.

If you want to write a good story you shouldn't write it so that it immediately casts doubt on itself. It should position itself as this is possible but the means are unknown or mysterious. It's super easy to do that because all you need to do is have the evil feudal lord have a goddamn evil right hand man. Instead what we have is an evil feudal lord with seemingly no one on their side or to deter mutiny in sight because apparently caring about the details of the premise of your story is too much to ask for.

Real history also tells us that it was the feudal lords who had the military power, not the royal families. This is why monarchs were dependent on them in order to keep their throne (and head). In some cases to the point that there was a saying "the king reigns but does not rule". Whatever troops he has would be loyal to him and his territory first and foremost, simply because it's he who pays and feeds them and it's his territory that their families live in. Even if they knew he planned to usurp the throne, why would they oppose it? He's already their ruler, and there are potential spoils to be had from such a move if he can succeed.

 

[superor707]

YAYYYYY

 

[Snowave]

I was feeling this will be a cute father and daughter relationship fix

step by step

Man..