Mutou and Satou - Vol. 2 Ch. 16

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You asked for it, so... (I apologize in advance for sounding harsh)

I understand wanting to pick up the series, but IMO you shouldn't move forward with future chapters without first lining up the necessary resources. I'm glad you already recognize how clunky the process is when you try to do everything yourself, and that the end result is a product of poor quality... brave to admit that, and certainly braver than a lot of other groups that post similar quality releases and insist there's nothing wrong (or go "do it yourself"). At the very least, please seek a proofreader to go along with the translator.

On the TL itself, the machine TL in this release is still pretty raw, with lots of very literal and awkward dialogue (I'm guessing it was taken directly from whatever service you used). Too many issues to list here, so I think it suffices to say that the entire chapter should be redone once you field a decent TL/PR team. I strongly urge you to do that before moving ahead.
 
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Yoooo! It's only me or Satou-chan Tiddies shrink?
 
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@lfscruz im sorry bout that, i forgot theres a word such as "thought" i was finding a past tense for think. And i could'nt go with anything. I'll make sure to improve in the future
 
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You wanna know my thoughts, huh? Well, I think you're cute! Thanks for the chapter!
 
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why even try if your just going to release MTL garbage, the issue is that this shit sticks around forever.

Genuine question, is english even your first lanuage? did you even try and read it before dropping this hot garbage?
 

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