My Harem in The Day of Apocalypse

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@LuffyMinati I tried to join the discord but the link is dead. The translation is off and I'd like to help proofread, I may not know other languages but I'm very good with English (native, aced high school literature studies, etc). Idk who to contact about that though?
 
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Translation is bad, pacing is bad, story, shit can't even tell what the story is since it's basically told nothing in four chapters. It's just bad. No idea what's going on, who anyone is, what the powers are why there is time travel, why it's limited, why it happened after he died i guess? Just garbage that makes no sense at all.
 

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