Yall are actually driving the rating so far into the ground the tl is just gonna give up. Dear tl, I hope this wont happen. I find this mess of a manga interesting.
This one is more.... existential than the one before. The characters all feel like they had their personality ripped out of them. They lost what made them unique. It's weird, what really went through the author's mind making this? Dear goodness.
I really like it! I don't normally read manga like this, but I kinda fell in love with it and blasted through both versions. This serialized version is different from the pre-serialized version, but it's not bad and has room to grow. The pre-serialized version ended on quite a cliffhanger, so I hope this one continues.
Maybe give your characters more time to get used to each other instead of introducing mc's victim in chapter 2 and trying to rape her in chapter 3.
It's like the mc already got a cheat sheet saying he's supposed to be a pervert and the esper girl is his obsession, instead of things flowing more naturally like before.