First bubble, "Gothe" should be "go to the"
During the map scene she says "it's closer if you across the wasteland" when it should be "it's closer if you go across the wasteland"
"Perhaps the count's attention, at times like these, it to be able to work togehter for a while longer" has two spelling errors, where "it" should be "is" and "togehter" should be "together"
The part about count baisen receiving "a patronage from all around the world" seems grammatically incorrect and context makes it seem as if somebody specific is giving him patronage from somewhere within the world, but to a point this bit is nitpicky
"The story of crystal palace has become even more strange" should have "the" before "crystal palace" since every other time it's refered to with "the"
"Clearly, the situation the hunting of demons is declining" simply sounds off, and I don't know enough myself about the raw to properly grammatically correct this
The goat often skips adding "the" to "crystal palace" but it's excusable because he's a goat
When telling them how to get to the crystal palace he says "got to the tree in the middle of the," which has mispelled "go" as "got" and forgets to add Lake at the end of "middle of the"
The trees being seen on water line is confusing, but I don't know enough about what they're trying to say to properly correct it