Nana Seiken to Maken no Hime - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - The Thousand Year Mission

[MangaDex]

 

[MyriadDestiny]

needs a proofreading pass, lots of weird sentence constructions

"this place are"
"the ancient swords are can only be destroyed"

 

[mayu_hojo]

got a feeling this will be an interesting one, though these 1000 year time leap stories are a dime a dozen.

that said there's a lot of written conveniences lol, which is not unusual for these kind. 1000 years pass and the language in this time hasn't changed, he already encounters and saves the princess to get immediate access to valuable information (tbh no complaints for this), and everyone immediately trusts MC... just hope these kinda conveniences don't keep happening...

 

[WillTell]

so... sword stuff? I have this feeling that even with a proper tl it wouldn't make sense. One of those manga pretending to have a story.

 

[rokegle135]

so... sword stuff? I have this feeling that even with a proper tl it wouldn't make sense. One of those manga pretending to have a story.

Yeah at this point you can just smell what will be dogshit and what will be actually good by the first chapter really sad

 

[SilverSun]

do normal people throw stones at princess of their own kingdom?

 

[hevensdragon]

Man this is just so confusing, it keeps listing holy, magic and demon swords, yet also saying there is 7, yet also some are destroyed. Is it 7 of each originally? But he also said it was the 6th demon sword he broke, so should only be his left, yet there is one other right away. The numbers just don't add up at all, also why is his demon sword not a problem, is it only the holy swords that are a problem? But what about the magic ones, also if demon swords aren't a problem why break them? Also why would he keep so quite about this? If every 1000 years a country is just wiped off the face of the world no way in hell that is covered up, or is it literally the entire world that is wiped, if so how has society gotten to were it is from scratch in 1000 years. Every time nearby counties would notice what happened and even if the nobles don't tell them what caused it the populace would notice and have stories of its sudden disappearance. And both nobles and commoners would fear this unknown threat, its not like it cares about your authority. While some may try to use it, many would try to find out what does it to avoid it happening to them. As its every 1000 years they should be paranoid of it happening to their nation in 3 years, someone showing up out of nowhere with abilities like the MC and claiming to know the source would at the very least eyebrow raising and worth thinking about and looking into a bit. These swords also are well known, it should have been noticed that hey they were all together in the country when it vanished, that trend should be very easy to notice with how they are in the hands of high profiles knights. All in all the "plot" is off to a very bad contrived start with nonsense worldbuilding and common sense, the translation quality isn't good, but rather than make it worse, it seems to be hiding how bad the writing is.

 

[Laxius]

The art is great.

 

[BigPoppaEffy]

I see why it's 74 pages. Lots of double ups lol

 

[Kaitensatsuma]

This is possibly the first time I haven't gotten at least two chapters in before quitting a story - and it isn't even really, like, any of the Genres I dislike particularly, it's just....so badly done.

 

[Kaiser92]

Yike that's a lot of exposition dump in the 1st chap 🙏