Negai wo Kanaete Moraou to Akuma wo Shoukan Shitakedo, Kawaikattanode Kekkonshimashita ~Akuma no Niidzuma~ - Ch. 37 - She has her Eyes on Me

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I'm glad Helvi isn't even humoring the girl. I hate when FMC's don't just straight up tell or indicate that they have no interest in women. Feels like they lead the lesbian characters on which can be more annoying than the possessive lesbian themselves.
 
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Y'all think she's gonna try to have Theo assassinated?

Thanks for the TL
after seeing helvi singlehandedly wipe out the mercenaries, i doubt she'd try anything dangerous on theo. if anything, i expect her to start getting along with theo as they gush about how great helvi is xd
 
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A poor liar like Theo shouldn't try to come up with lies that are too far from the truth. He should have just said he was experimenting with magic he couldn't handle. Helvi happened to be nearby and came to see what's going on. It would be a "lie" suitable for a lousy liar because it wouldn't, superficially, be too far from what really happened.
Even simpler. Don't lie.
He should just say that he's too embarrassed to tell his lovers' tale to a stranger.
Simple and true. This would match him better than a half-truth that can barely pass as technically true. Because even then he will give signs that he's hiding something.
So he should shut up (though this seems tough for him) and act shy (which comes naturally to him). Nobody is entitled to his private stories. Much less random strangers.
 
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Thank you for your concern! I will work on the centering. I went ahead and took a look at your uploads so I could get an idea of what it should look like and found a lot of examples of unappealing TS, but it would take too long to screenshot every page, so I just got a few examples. Please, tell whoever did all of your series to center their text as well, make the fonts look good, and increase or lower the size based on the bubble size, etc., thanks:pacman:
Huh... What's the zombies series? It any good?
 
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I don't think the constant murders of random criminals works in what is otherwise a cutesy soft wishfulfillment-y story. Is this supposed to be cute or is it the fucking punisher
 
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Thank u always for ur great work...
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Even the devil didnt want to come near her...
XD...
 
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So, how are they gonna figure out the guilty ones for the assault among all the adversaries she must surely have amassed by this point?
 
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A villain that Helvi can't simply flip inside out...or at least would cause problems if she did.
I mean, not any problems she couldn't solve by flipping even more things inside out, but it'd make Theo sad anyway and it's not like there's any threat, so she's got no real reason to start inverting.
 

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