Netoge no Yome ga Ninki Idol datta ken ~Cool-kei no kanojo wa genjitsu demo yome no tsumori de iru~ - Ch. 10

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Even just proofreading will help.

For instance, "I wanted to surprise you with a surprise!"

That sentence is redundant. Its just "I wanted to surprise you" alot of the subjects of the sentences are getting mixed up too.

Thanks for keeping this manga going. Hope things get better as you go.
 
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For the moment, you're probably better off trying to find a good TL of the LN if the story really matters to you.
 
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This felt like a huge tonal shift after that wild drama. It's like "oh yeah, the premise was meant to be in a video game", but the game wasn't fleshed out at all outside of the two doing fishing. Rough chapter for sure. As others have said too, the translation was a bit rough at times.
 
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I thought the tl groups dropped this manga after the shitshow from the previous chapters. Anyway, this translation makes no sense. I had to go read the raw instead.
 
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As a german I love how they often put german words in their work.
Sturmangriff means something like assault
 

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