Next Life - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - The New Land

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I like this, it's not the most original with the whole died and became over powered but the characters are already being developed and we have a language barrier that wasn't cleared in the first pages and allowed for some cute non-verbal communication. I've got a good feelin.
 
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Hypothermia is not a good way to go..... Although i suppose its better than burning alive
 
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this may not be completely original but it uses a lot of interesting concepts I have not seen together before. I like it.
 
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this dude is the biggest idiot I've ever seen, i've never seen someone jump to conclusions so damn fast and not only that but also attack them, stupiiiiid
 

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