I am enjoying the story right now ^_^ some thign that have been bothering me is some words that go down to the next line are un hyphenated it is improving each chapter but still some words were missed it makes things hard to read
for example page 14 Girlfriend? bubble and another example page 19 something... the g goes on to another line with out a hyphen some-thing... may have been better there.
I can't wait for the next chapter though! ^^ good luck and thank you!!!