Notes from the Garden of Lilies

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This was pretty overrated considering how raw the were the character relationship are.

Aside from the First Love, the main story is quite bland and boring.
Friend this, friend that, skipping school then interrupt the classes to tell her feelings.

What a mess of writings.

Certainly author doesn't know much about Yuri i guess.
Even that First love is hardly a Yuri.
 
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Just two lesbians and youre supposed to like it cause ones a blackmailing manipulative cunt

Im giving this a big, BIG fuckin F
Hard pass this dogshit
 
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Eh. It's okay. I wish it were longer, and explored an actual evolving relationship. And the long interlude with a totally different story was sort of a weird, annoying move.

But it was okay. I'mma give it a 7.5/10.
 
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oof such harsh comments, hurts my heart T_T really disappointed there wasn't a kiss or even an official "they're going out now moment" but i guess the author struggled with that, if it was just longer~
still gotta give it a 10/10 tho, thanks for the amazing work~
 
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I'm not a yuri guy but I think it's fine I guess. I got halfway through first love and I has to stop cause it just made me feel like shit. I don't think it's worth me rating.
 
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This is a pretty well written story, I really like the character dynamic between Fujiwara and Yuri. The author themselves said "I like when it's true but not confirmed" about yuri so that should give you an idea of what to expect from it.

The sadistic honors student and pure delinquent is a fun trope and it's done really well here, only the main couple (and a side couple) are really given any depth in the story but it doesn't really need much more.
 
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@Bushidolad I'm sorry but there was no blackmailing though. It's pure teasing, I bet you dropped it off after reading ch 1. Lol
Even if they only read ch1, there is nothing in there could be called "blackmailing". The only way you could call that "blackmailing" is when you see Fujiwara with the notebook, you immediately assume it's "blackmailing" and close the chapter.
 
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oof such harsh comments, hurts my heart T_T really disappointed there wasn't a kiss or even an official "they're going out now moment" but i guess the author struggled with that, if it was just longer~
still gotta give it a 10/10 tho, thanks for the amazing work~
The last 2 pages of the omake show them living together, I think it that's good enough.
 

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