Maybe less chapters or maybe less days?await for 2 chapters in the next 2 days maybe less
this time less days since i'm already done with chapter 16 and just need to do chapter 15. i just don't want to mess up the orderMaybe less chapters or maybe less days?![]()
Or even said sorry.So she knows he got upset listening to her talk about that Hot Male Mangaka, but didn't put any thought into why?![]()
I'll tie him to a boulder before you toss himPart of me is liking the progress we hve so far, but the other part of me is wanting to throw the mc off a balcony for freaking out so goddamn much. What is he, a hamster on life support?
Are you talking physically or mentally? Because yes.This chick is all over the place...
i didn't notice it until now, i'll try to make it better next chapter, i don't understand very well what do you mean with the "I" and "i" but i'll try to take it into account next time.@Peterociclos my biggest issue is probably that your text is sometimes not properly centered, look at the first page. The width of a line is sometimes too big where the text is exactly at the line of the text balloon. Either more lines/hyphenation or smaller fontsize (even if its just 0.5pt, as long there is some whitespace left).
Oh before i forget, never use the capital I (with the stripe at top at bottom) for anything else except "I". 1st page you have "It's'. This should be "it's" with wildwords.
I think it's the second time you mention chapter 16. I'm really curious nowthis time less days since i'm already done with chapter 16 and just need to do chapter 15. i just don't want to mess up the order
i just think it has one of the best pannels in the manga yet and i just think MTL will fuck it upI think it's the second time you mention chapter 16. I'm really curious now![]()