Maybe less chapters or maybe less days?await for 2 chapters in the next 2 days maybe less
this time less days since i'm already done with chapter 16 and just need to do chapter 15. i just don't want to mess up the orderMaybe less chapters or maybe less days?
Or even said sorry.So she knows he got upset listening to her talk about that Hot Male Mangaka, but didn't put any thought into why?
I'll tie him to a boulder before you toss himPart of me is liking the progress we hve so far, but the other part of me is wanting to throw the mc off a balcony for freaking out so goddamn much. What is he, a hamster on life support?
Are you talking physically or mentally? Because yes.This chick is all over the place...
i didn't notice it until now, i'll try to make it better next chapter, i don't understand very well what do you mean with the "I" and "i" but i'll try to take it into account next time.@Peterociclos my biggest issue is probably that your text is sometimes not properly centered, look at the first page. The width of a line is sometimes too big where the text is exactly at the line of the text balloon. Either more lines/hyphenation or smaller fontsize (even if its just 0.5pt, as long there is some whitespace left).
Oh before i forget, never use the capital I (with the stripe at top at bottom) for anything else except "I". 1st page you have "It's'. This should be "it's" with wildwords.
I think it's the second time you mention chapter 16. I'm really curious nowthis time less days since i'm already done with chapter 16 and just need to do chapter 15. i just don't want to mess up the order
i just think it has one of the best pannels in the manga yet and i just think MTL will fuck it upI think it's the second time you mention chapter 16. I'm really curious now