Yeah, the speech bubble for the upper-left panel and the first bubble for the right panel need to be switched.I got the point but I don't think the dialogue matches.
Not quite, 3 way cycle between them and the exclamation from the guard off screen as well, hooded person clearly didn't know the guy in suit so the bubble that matches with the ?! is where it's meant to be, not attached to either of those two.Yeah, the speech bubble for the upper-left panel and the first bubble for the right panel need to be switched.
The vampire arc was before and closer to what I'd say is the main plot, and the origins arc is the one that's "wtf for whatever reason".Previously, the story followed after the MC and his mysterious origins.
Now it focuses on vampires, for whatever reason? Wtf?
I can agree to some degree. The "origin arc" felt completely unnecessary. But it was coherent.The vampire arc was before and closer to what I'd say is the main plot, and the origins arc is the one that's "wtf for whatever reason".
I mean, not really? It's the continuation of the arc that went on before the origin arc. The shift between the arcs might be sudden, but it's not "outta nowhere".This just came outta nowhere, it feels like a chapter is missing. Even if we want to tie it to the MC being undead, it is still very off-kilter.