Nozomanu Fushi no Boukensha - Ch. 57 - Habitat

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I got the point but I don't think the dialogue matches.

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its been awhile since i read the story.
do we know who the vampire who visited is ?
i dont recognize them
 
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Yeah, the speech bubble for the upper-left panel and the first bubble for the right panel need to be switched.
Not quite, 3 way cycle between them and the exclamation from the guard off screen as well, hooded person clearly didn't know the guy in suit so the bubble that matches with the ?! is where it's meant to be, not attached to either of those two.
 
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Wth kind of shift in story is this? Is this a filler, or what?
Previously, the story followed after the MC and his mysterious origins.

Now it focuses on vampires, for whatever reason? Wtf?
This reminds of Gantz and its shitty introduction of new characters halfway through.
 
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The "MC and his mysterious origin" arc is beyond terrible and if it actually get scrapped out of nowhere and we're back on the vampire plotline I'm grateful
 
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Polite guard.

Normally, that kind of trap door is in front of the boss's desk to get rid of unwanted guests, not the other way around.

To be fair, that saintess looks huggable.

Well, one of those places sure have vampires.

Previously, the story followed after the MC and his mysterious origins.
Now it focuses on vampires, for whatever reason? Wtf?
The vampire arc was before and closer to what I'd say is the main plot, and the origins arc is the one that's "wtf for whatever reason".
 
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The vampire arc was before and closer to what I'd say is the main plot, and the origins arc is the one that's "wtf for whatever reason".
I can agree to some degree. The "origin arc" felt completely unnecessary. But it was coherent.
This just came outta nowhere, it feels like a chapter is missing. Even if we want to tie it to the MC being undead, it is still very off-kilter.
 
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This just came outta nowhere, it feels like a chapter is missing. Even if we want to tie it to the MC being undead, it is still very off-kilter.
I mean, not really? It's the continuation of the arc that went on before the origin arc. The shift between the arcs might be sudden, but it's not "outta nowhere".
 
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According to my notes, Isaac IS the long-haired long-eared man in a suit, and him exclaiming "Lord Isaac?!" does not make sense. Some dialog swapping error appears to have happened again in this release. :facepalm:

I think it makes more sense in this manner:
Pg.8 Panel1 Dialog1 (long-haired man): "There's no need for that."
Pg.8 Panel1 Dialog2 (offscreen character, hooded character or the guard): "Lord Isaac?!"
Pg.8 Panel2 Dialog1 (hooded character): "You won't let me attempt the challenge...?"
 

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