Nozomanu Fushi no Boukensha - Ch. 63 - Unicorn

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Unicorns? But they have wings like a Pegasus? Right, there was a word for that, Alicorn.

I almost forgot about the mysterious woman he encountered in the labyrinth. I don't think we've even gotten her name yet at this point. Good to know she isn't forgotten. Lorraine got to show off in battle and now she also got to test her spanking new holy power. Rentt ruined her spellcasting though and now the spell is stuck with a weird name.

Vampires... I feel like vampire hunter Eve is going to show up again in this arc at some point.

There's duplicated text in panel 1 on page 15. Every recent chapter so far has some glaring quality issues, I guess I should just expect the poor quality from this group moving forward...
 
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I think the author has lost the plot at this point imo.

(Unreadable ranting starts)
The main character just kind of stumbled into the capital after being kidnapped by the village grandma and captain with a K because he needed to know about this ancient civilization bs that nobody cares about? Why does some deepa$$ floor of a dungeon house this civilization? Why can’t they just live anywhere else? No explanation for their king being monster Jesus. The dumb villagers are supposedly descendants but only 3 people have any noteworthy nonsense blood powers, which boils down to controlling monsters (absurdly powerful), teleportation rocks (Mc is only given one pair, which he doesn’t know how to use), and some other nonsense confusingly translated power that’s mentioned BUT neither shown nor explained.

They decide that they need to go straight to the guild for some reason but not as adventurers because that would be bad(?) and meet up with some bum to collect colored “herbs”.
Why do you need three SPECIFIC people to collect herbs? Is it really that hard to find someone to escort you in the capital of the nation?

Another thing that makes no sense is these royals cruising around in their low rider in the forest. 4 non exceptional guards and the unicorn princess “seeking blood relatives”. What the f%ck? Did I misread something? What does that mean you maniac? Why are there vampires having a top secret jorking session in the woods? The guard clearly gleamed absolutely nothing about what they were doing, but the vampires decided to attack some people very clearly associated with royalty but then gave up because of the sun? Weren’t they already in the sun? Also, the three vampires shown previously seem to have no problem with the sun (I mean maybe not the vampire girl because she’s always in the shade but I digress).

The whole vampire subplot(maybe you could call it main plot?) is dumb. Him getting vampire blood from the aristocrats is highly suspicious. Vampires are supposedly this highly taboo dangerous existence according the vamp hunter chick and the mc’s reluctance to tell anybody he is one. But it’s completely fine for the MC to ask for some from a highly influential family of aristocrats in a horde of magical items? Isn’t vampire blood technically a rare monster material (used in smithing), so why was it given as a “extra reward” by the aristocrats out of nowhere? If he asked for it that means they are just cool with handing this stuff out, no questions asked from either party.
Also, if vampires need that dumb flower to “maintain their human form”, why does the MC need none? That imply they have a nonhuman form.

I’m also bitter about the inconsistent translations man. Bunch of characters have switched names a bunch. MC when from Lento, to Lentt, to Rentt, and back to Lentt. Same thing with Lorraine(Loretta?), and the dumb spirit fairy thing, whose name also changed three times. Grammar is sometimes good, but sometimes stuff like “I” is replaced with “you” interchangeably where it doesn’t make sense. Sometimes the speech bubbles are pointing to the wrong person, have nothing there, or maybe even have their text switched with another?

The scale of power makes no sense, there’s supposedly a BIG gap in power to the level of a mythril adventurer that the MC wants to reach, so that seems like that’s gonna be pretty far away as he frolics around doing f all as he immediately becomes equivalent to a human invalidating the dumb gimmick that this isekai started with. dragon is thrown around left and right when supposedly there are only four in the world, and their significance on the plot seems to be important as two have already shown up (sitting 4 ranks below the point where he can fight them). it’s kinda dumb and defeats the built up of him demonstrating his strength or whatever to the dragon who killed him. Also, filled with “information”? What?

(Unreadable ranting ends)
Series started off pretty promising but this is starting to devolve into nonsense as more and more nonsense plot points are introduced leading to an inevitable nonsensical progression that takes forever with nonsense ending. Probably gonna drop this, was a 8 but I’m thinking a 7 now.
 
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I somehow missed the anime for this series, only realised I did when I saw the dub come out.
This got an anime? The hell?

Remind me again why they're at this city again? I know they were at Lento's hometown, it was revealed the citizens had the potential for power, then these 2 and the 2 older ppl teleported to the outskirts... Now what?
 
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This got an anime? The hell?

Remind me again why they're at this city again? I know they were at Lento's hometown, it was revealed the citizens had the potential for power, then these 2 and the 2 older ppl teleported to the outskirts... Now what?
Yeah, the sub came out back in January and ran till March, The dub came out not too long ago.

Honestly, I can't remember why they are there so I'm rereading this series.
 
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Blue watermarks really bring out the manhwaFreak kinda feel ya know
And for this level of translation, too; like, if you're gonna ask people to give your site some traffic, you might consider having grammatical translations...
 

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