NTREVENGE

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I can't get enough from cruel "getting revenge on my bullies" stuff even if the story is crap.

But with that being said, some things were really bothering me about how the author made the MC forcefully look suspicious:
1- Why the heck would he kidnap the first girl while they are still in school and people know that he's the last one she was seen with? Even an elementary student would think about that.
2- Where did the blonde girl get the lipstick from? The MC took all their clothes and it didn't seem like she had a bag. Was it in her bra or something?
3- The police officer really just saw some random numbers on the MC's back and went full "mY iNtUiTiOn" mode. If I was him, I would think they were just cheating in an exam or that it's a prank from a friend or something. And while it's true that he was the last person who was seen with only one of the kidnapped girls (the rest must be last seen with other people as well btw), he must has just took a minute in the teleportation he kidnapped her with. So he surely was seen attending the rest of the day and leaving from the front door like any normal student. How would he kidnap her from inside the school in only a few minutes without anyone noticing anything strange? Heck even his bullies said that he could never! But it looks like officers develop a skill to smell culprits nowadays...

They later got other clues that made him more suspicious, but these were what initiated the whole thing.

Correct me if I was just dump and didn't notice other important stuff as I had just binged this at 5 AM and I feel so sleepy. 😴
Police be like MUH intinution

But can't figure out why on earth a high school girl would suddenly be a hikkikomori given dude didn't hide his rape and would be easy to find proof
Or miss every single obvious sign of mc being bullied tf


But nah mc bad mmk

Somehow ltr also knows azuza is the reason why but didn't follow her and see her get blackmailed by the scumbag

10/10 cop

Worse than irl cops

It's one thing for a series to have corrupt cops
And another for peak Incompetence author is disgusisng as smarts
 
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The manga includes bonus novels from the author at the end of volume/tankoubon releases. Here's my translation of a novel from Volume 1. I'm thinking about translating others but haven't started yet.

NTREVENGE Episode 0: The Beginning
The siren of a passing patrol car faded into the distance, leaving behind the Doppler effect. One turn away from the glitzy entertainment district lay a back alley reeking of stagnation. A fat, overfed rat scurried past stacked liquor crates as neon lights reflected in oily puddles leftover from the evening rain, casting garish colors resembling the caked makeup of aging hostesses.
"Goddammit!"
A man slammed a door angrily as he emerged from the back entrance of a rundown building. Dressed in a tacky red shirt and white suit, his gold necklace glinted ostentatiously. Though decent-looking, his cheek was swollen red, as if from a brawl.
"That little brat’s got some nerve!" he spat, lighting a cigarette with trembling fingers. Sparks scattered in the dark alley, briefly illuminating his bitter expression.
"...You."
A woman’s voice suddenly whispered by his ear, making him jolt. He looked up to find a completely naked girl standing before him.
(A foreigner? The hell — where’d she come from? No one was here a second ago...)
Her appearance was nothing like a Japanese girl. She looked around 17 or 18, with long platinum-blond hair and mismatched eyes. Her skin was porcelain-pale, her waist slim despite her curvaceous figure. She studied him head to toe with a curious gaze, then tilted her head like a child.
"Where is this?"
"Wha—? More like, who the fuck are you? You ain’t hookin’ here, right?"
He eyed her warily. Not that he disliked naked women, but this was way too weird. Plus, she showed zero embarrassment.
(Doesn’t look like she escaped from one of the clubs...)
This was a red-light district packed with shady businesses. Even with the cops cracking down lately, plenty of illegal joints still operated here. But if she’d fled from a trafficker, she wouldn’t be this calm.
"Sigh... Surface men are always like this. Answering a question with another question — how crude and unchanging. Nevermind."
She shrugged dismissively, locking eyes with him.
"Guh!?"
His heart lurched violently. His diaphragm spasmed, forcing air from his lungs as his cigarette tumbled into a puddle with a sizzle. He staggered back against the wall, unable to look away.
(What the?! What’s happening to me?!)
His pulse roared in his ears, blood rushing so fast his head spun.
"Let’s skip the hassle and ask your body directly."

The girl pressed her body against him with a seductive sway, sliding her fingers over his crotch through his pants. Where her fingertips touched, it felt like fire had been set ablaze. Despite the terror freezing his spine, his heated crotch stiffened and stood rigid.
"Ugh... hnn..."
He couldn't even move a finger to resist. His entire body tensed, barely able to let out a moan. Ignoring his state, the girl unzipped his pants, pulled out his member, and began stroking it without restraint.
"My, my, what a cute little thing you’ve got here. This pathetic size would never satisfy a woman. How pitiful."
She brought her face close to his, mocking him. But his fear overpowered any frustration at being ridiculed.
"H... help..."
"No can do♡"
She grinned brightly, turning her backside toward him.
"Look. Over here."
As she spread the slit between her thighs with her fingers, he grabbed her slender white waist with trembling hands, unable to resist.
"Now, enjoy yourself to your heart's content."
"S-stop..."
It wasn’t that he lacked confidence in bed — he’d slept with plenty of women. But his instincts screamed: This is bad. Don’t do this. Even as he desperately fought, his body betrayed him. His hips thrust forward helplessly. As his member sank deeper into her depths, he felt like prey being devoured.
"Mmm... ahhn!"
Her sultry moans slithered into his ears, scrambling his thoughts. The wet friction of her folds against him sent electric jolts of pleasure stabbing through his brain.
"Ghh! Ah! Ahhh!"
Thought dissolved into pure reflex. Roaring like a beast, he began thrusting violently into her.
"Ah! Ah! Yes! Just like that—ah! Ah! Ahn!"
In the darkness, pale flesh bounced wildly. Lewd wet sounds and the girl’s moans echoed through the alleyway, rising like phantom footsteps up the exposed emergency staircase. Yet as his hips grew frantic, the man’s ragged breaths grew weaker.
"Ahhn... ah... ah... It’s almost time"
"Guh!"
The moment she declared it, his body stiffened. Spurt after spurt shot into her as his frame withered like a deflating balloon. By the time the last drop was squeezed out, he collapsed into a pitiful heap of skin and bones.
"Haaah... This barely even counts as a snack"
The girl glanced down at the corpse she’d just coupled with and shrugged.

The girl's name was Asmode.
She was the demon who governed one of the Seven Deadly Sins: Lust.
Was being the key word — because now, she barely retained a fraction of that power.
Driven out of her position as a pillar of the Seven Deadly Sins by her underlings, she had narrowly escaped to the mortal realm. Sure, it was a cheap ambush, but demons don’t bother with notions like cowardice or "fair play". Still, letting herself be disrespected wasn’t exactly her style, either.
First, she needed to regain her lost strength. She’d just drained a man of every drop of his vitality, but the magic she recovered was a pittance. Let’s be clear — she wasn’t some lowly succubus, satisfied with nibbling scraps of energy.
"I need a contractor after all"
The most efficient way to harvest magic was through the extraction of concepts. Lewd acts, obscene scenarios, the anguish of resisting desire, the agony of a stolen lover, rage, sorrow, the guilty thrill of betrayal, despair, the ecstasy of submission — a whirlwind feast of lust. She aimed to create those circumstances for her contractor, to feast on that very concept.
Asmode rested a finger on her chin, pondering.
(Now then... where to start looking?)
Not just anyone would do. A young man — specifically, one brimming with vengeance — would be ideal. Vengeance warps morals. By skillfully guiding that hatred, she could enslave countless women. That would provide a steady stream of energy.
She’d already devoured every shred of the man’s memories. According to them, in the mortal realm, Asmode looked to be around high school age.
(Then the so-called “high school” seems like the perfect place for a hunt.)
Using the man’s memories, she conjured a school uniform with her magic and slipped into it. The school his sister attended was quite far, but physical distance meant little to a demon.
(Hmm... Let’s hope I find someone suitable there.)
 
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Unless it's some kind of supernatural highschooler or gangster kind of thing, I don't understand school bullying. As someone who once made a legend of pegging my bully so hard his pelvis crack, I have no idea why they wouldn't fight back. I'm not saying you have to send them to the hospital, but sending a message is simple. Rocks are everywhere, right?
 
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Here's a quick translation of the novel included in Volume 2. Honestly nothing important there and it's shorter than others so it didn't take that much time. Next one is about Hina from around the time when Chiaki started serving MC.

NTREVENGE Episode Sekido: We are Being Cornered
The sound of fabric being stroked closely resembled the muted static of a radio. The soft rustle of fibers. A dry sound. The reason such faint noises sounded so loud was because everyone in the room had simultaneously held their breath — leaving the space devoid of breathing sounds.
"Hey... I'll make you feel good. I'll... I'll try my best."
Miku's actions were shockingly bold. As her fingers began caressing Sakuraba's crotch, the wrinkles of his pants shifted under her touch, gradually revealing the shape of what lay beneath.
(Wh-what the hell is she thinking?!)
Miku — who had been humiliated after trying to curry favor and getting coldly rejected — now pressed herself against Sakuraba mere moments after me and Hina had mocked her. At first, I didn’t understand what Miku was doing. The idea of a girl making the first move hadn’t occurred to me. I’d always assumed guys took the lead in these situations.
(W-wait, hold on—!)
Ignoring my inner turmoil, Miku knelt before Sakuraba with a dreamy expression, hooked her fingers on his zipper, and skillfully pulled that thing out.
A heated, masculine groan. A feminine, obscenely sweet smile. The cramped confinement room suddenly felt like it had skyrocketed in temperature.
(N-no way...)
I hastily looked away. My cheeks twitched. My throat went dry. I couldn’t bear to watch.
Sure, I’d seen guys’ junk before.
The karate dojo I attended didn’t have separate changing rooms, and plenty of guys went commando under their uniforms. I’d accidentally caught glimpses more times than I wanted during outfit changes.
But the flaccid, pitiful things those guys hid under their uniform hems were nothing like this swollen, veiny monstrosity.
(What the hell is that gross thing...? Looks like some alien...)
Even after turning away, the image burned into my mind. The color and shape felt too unnatural to be part of a human body. I knew the biological basics from health class, but this was different. Wrong.
Just as I shook my head violently, Miku’s breathy whisper reached me.
"It’s huge..."
(S-so it really is big... maybe not all guys are like that? Maybe he’s just a freak...)
The thought made Sakuraba seem like some terrifying creature. Desperate, I glanced at Hina beside me. She was staring at the two with a look of disgust — but no surprise.
(Hina’s got a boyfriend... she’s probably seen erect ones before. If she’s not shocked, maybe... this is normal?)
Then Hina furrowed her brows and asked me:
"...Isn’t that thing massive?"
(The hell should I know!?)
I nearly screamed. Putting aside the fact that even Hina thought it was huge — why ask me? I’ve never even had a boyfriend. I don’t know what "normal" is.
It’s not like I was unpopular or uninterested in relationships. I’d had crushes, dreamed of a sweet romance, wanted a boyfriend. But not just anyone.
The sweaty dojo guys? No thanks. Players like Tokushige? Hell no. Broody guys like me? Pass. Creepy loners like Sakuraba? Absolutely not.
My ideal was a cute, delicate guy I could protect. Even if real life wasn’t like shoujo manga with roses scattering everywhere, I genuinely believed love — and what comes after — should feel sparkling and magical.
But my hopes crumbled as the sounds from behind me grew even more visceral.
"Nn, nfu... slurp..."
The lewd moans of the man and woman mixed with obscene, wet sounds reminiscent of a cat eating. When I hesitantly glanced toward the two, I saw Takeuchi Miku with her head buried between Sakuraba’s legs.
(Sh-she’s licking it...!)
I instinctively furrowed my brows, only for Miku to lock eyes with me while still sliding her tongue toward that. Her vaguely triumphant expression pissed me off instantly.
(Who does she think she is...?)
I’d always hated Takeuchi Miku. From the moment we ended up in the same class. If someone asked why, I’d be stuck — I just hated her. If I could articulate reasons, I’d probably have better grades. Yeah, I know I’m an idiot.
So when Hina suggested we "put Miku in her place", I was all for it. If she’s annoying, crush her. Put the bitch in the dirt. That’s all. Beating her up? Fine. Stripping her naked to humiliate her? Whatever.
But when Hina said "let’s turn her into Tokushige’s toilet", even I balked. And her creepy grin while saying "we’ll have to train her properly so she can start taking clients soon" made me nope out hard.
Still, I owed Miku nothing. If Hina wanted to go that far, fine. I’d just stay out of it.
Now, as Miku met my glare with a gross smirk, she sank Sakuraba’s cock deep into her throat, bobbing her head frantically.
(Huh? Ew... isn’t that suffocating? How’s it even—)
Just watching made me gag. Yet despite her strained expression, Miku looked... blissful. Even happy.
(Is she... used to this?)
If so, we’d completely misread things. We thought we’d dragged Miku to the bottom, but this? The tables had turned. Being experienced with men was a huge advantage now. Remembering her smug face earlier sent a chill down my spine.
"...God, she’s so gross with all that fawning."
Hina sneered next to me, still clueless. But that’s not it. Hina probably hasn’t realized yet. We were the ones being cornered by Miku. She was about to get her revenge. And it was Hina herself who gave Miku the means to do it.
 
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