Good! Nice message about being yourself being being around like minded people, which is so true no matter how old ya are. Gotta enjoy life n all that mess ya know?
I'll put a stamp of approval for a serialization. Maybe not a real long one though, just enough. Thanks for the Oneshot.
That was a fun oneshot. But honestly, i dont think i can tolerate reading toddler behavior from a highschooler man. But this does have that classic romcom writing style which i would try reading.
"My whole family heard, including my father who decided to work from home today!!"
The ending got a good chuckle. Very cute.
Though, as a one shot, it'd work better if it had ended without the confession misunderstanding and all that, but as a hook for a series and introductory chapter (chapter one) it works well.