Officer, Your Tail is Showing - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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AHHHH IVE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG FOR THIS CHAPTER

TYSM FOR THE UPLOAD!!
 
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Thanks for the snipe!
(Literally cuz i genuinely did not feel comfortable tling it and i never finished tling chapter 2)

Your translations are pretty off imo.

How did "How dirty./ So improper." Turn into "really careless"?

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Medicine? Not drugs? Yeah, you can argue that they're the same things and one's just more legal than the other, but medicine sounds like a good thing while drugs has a negative connotation.
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The first bubble doesn't convey the mockery & how stupid she actually looks enough
Would be better as: I really should show the world how utterly stupid you look like right now.
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The circled bubble should've been refering back to the side text where she called the girl "kind"
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Commander: YOu will go in a secret mission, but first you will consume a slavering drug
General: what will happen if the human general ask by the govern secrets or this mission, if my will is broken?
Commander: ups
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