Oh! Dangun - Ch. 33

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I feel like this needed like half a chapter more transition from the previous tone, leading into it. Like a hint of foreshadowing that the tone was about to change to cursed nightmare-land would have gone a really long way, I assumed it was just another dream of hers until the rat people showed up to clue me in that it wasn't.-
 
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Thank u always for ur great work...
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Just when it did began?
(OωO`)...
 

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