I really like the last chapter, but the others ones are too dull and unoriginal, and I really can't get past the art style. It's colors are too flat, with disproportionate and anatomically off-putting characters and dull backgrounds. It's clear where the artist traced when where they didn't. The writing is okay at best but nothing that I haven't really seen before. This is only made worse by the use of obvious tools like the gradient tool and the opacity tool to achieve certain effects.
If the author could improve their art drastically, draw on-model and allow for more dynamic shots of characters in motion, then a lot of the manga could improve. As it stands, it looks like a deviantart page from 2008.