@
laughingman "wrong I'm a native English speaker using ocr and translation software so a lot of dictionary time is needed to keep everything from sounding rough"
Thats bullshit. There is no way that you are a native English speaker if you think people speak this way.
Example on page 19 talking about the chair guy was throwing away: Girl- I want it. What was it? Guy-I could very well have them.
Notice how that conversation makes absolutely no sense. Probably because someone just threw the Japanese into a web translator and said Fuck It.
Also the redrawing is nonexistent, it looks like you just used whiteout and erased the Japanese and then put the English over top.
And have you ever heard of capitalization?