Onani Master Kurosawa - Vol. 4 Ch. 31

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Well that was a nice read, but I hated all this shit with sugawa. Don't get me wrong, she's a great tsundere NOW.
But what about the time where she bullied kitahara? Honestly I fucking hate this shit, I can't believe the bullies didn't just get away with their shit but had their redemption arc (no, the cumming part was nothing imo) kitahara had it the WORST, and even her time with the reunion didn't seem enough.
Still a nice manga, but I side with kitahara's thinking. Which is pretty weird because the one who I should relate to, or like their thinking is my boi cum master but whatever.
 
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Agreed...it's kinda weird how he gets with the girl that beat the shit out of him
Pretty Ironic isn't it? That's the charm, two people of the same stems.

The point of this manga is Children are unstable and redemption.

I still feel bad for Kitahara tho for all the things Sugawa did to her, but. Not everyone will get their karma the same way, things may not seem cruel to us now but will if we're on the same plate.
 
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it is a strange turn of events. That gal girl didnt get much screen time apart from the time she was just bullying people, so them getting together is kinda................ weird/forced? Plus, that girl used to be a huge bully, she hasnt got that much redemption yet to have my support for her. Soooo
Late reply but Lmao IKR!!! I just finished this and as i was reading the comments i was thinking im crazy for thinking this since or maybe i missed a chapter where she gets her redemption arc or smthn cause everyone likes her now for absolutely no reason. Girl nearly ruined someones life, but is somehow best girl. Atleast mc the time for his crime, she got away scot free. All she did was do a reformed bully tsundere girl bit without the reformed stuff lol.

I can’t feel satisfied with this, deffo forced. Maybe author had to rush end.

Then the whole reunion thing, like nah, dun make sense to me. There could be other ways to help her out, but bring her back to those people who brought pain or just stood by while she suffered or laughed, i dunno, i dont get how that helps.

Well whatever, i guess MCs whole arc more than makes up for all these strange lacking bits. Solid 7/10 imo.
 
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this felt like a separate short story from the rest lol personally felt like the main story ended when Kitahara opened the door and this was just bonus content
 
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So he gets with the person who bullied his friend to the point she became a shut in. Wow. And she thinks that a simple "apology" would undo the terrible things she done to her. That's garbage. You must make amends before you could ever think of being redeemed. And she didn't do that. Would like to see bullies get their just desserts some times.
 
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I really love to re-read this masterpiece once in a while. With a decade passed since my first read it only gets better. Too bad we'll never have an adaptation.
 
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Absolutely disgusting ending. In a story supposedly about redemption, the criminals that pushed a child near to suicide get away completely scot free without even an admonition.
 
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I don't think everyone in the class would just forget what Kurosawa did. But I can believe at least the main cast did. Good ending.
 
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These are my final thoughts on the story. Mostly on the ending, the quality of writing showcased and my final thoughts.

Honestly, I quite like the ending UNTIL Sugawa the Yankee (USA! USA! USA!) became the main love interest. To me it feels weird that Sugawa became the main love interest and it comes out of left field. Hell, even the MC acknowledges it that Sugawa and he are an odd match. Though we spend two chapters with Sugawa, and I don't think it ends the story quite as well, nor sets up a believable romance between the two than saw Kitahara would (I'll explain later)

Since I rawdogged this series, I initially thought in a previous comment Kitahara didn't like Kurosawa and Takigawa getting closer during the karaoke scene.When they do leave the karaoke room it shatters the idea that Kurosawa and Kitahara are kindred spirits. Remember that Kurosawa has begun to reform while Kitahara has not. She is still a raging mess maybe even the whole pissed her off. Thus causing her to inmate a plan to link Takigawa and Nagaoka to enrage Kurosawa. Why? This serves two purposes; one: is to simply get a stronger leash on Kurosawa and that leads to reason two: to keep Kurosawa her slave to feed her ego. The reason why I thought this was a plan by Kitahara was it would be a serious plot hole if Takigawa and Nagaoka end up together out of blue. As Kurosawa and us readers only get speculations on why they hook up.

This is also why I believe that Takigawa should be the main love interest as we spend the most amount of time with her is the most logical choice as they are actually Kindred spirts in ways. Now, the author needs to build up the romance, i.e become the last beacon of salvation during his darkest hour. The author kind of forgets Kitahara exists until she gets into a DDLC Yuri mood. ( But this means Takigawa needs to stay out because we NEED the climax of Kurosawa getting cucked. Unlike Rent-a-Girlfriend this canon event tests if he has truly reformed or he bends Kitahara's will and truly become her dog. (Plus he does need to atone for his crimes)

And Kurosawa does! He confesses to his crimes, it shit a first but he slowly rebuilt his reputation and became normal :) Don't get me wrong the author did a fabulous job writing this story! (Also that Teacher being proud of Kurosawa's atonement was phenomenal writing!) Its just I don't like how forced Sugawa is injected into the story.

On a whole, the story is quite well executed, besides some parts of the later manga scenes and plot holes.

As it stands Goon Master Kurosawa is imperfect, a chipped diamond if you will. Its still def an 8.0. As stated in an earlier comment, I strongly believe the story should get an anime adaptation (12 episodes), but characters should be in a high school setting ( yk lightning_mcgroomer.exe) as the story would work fine in that setting ( it also makes it easier to market to studios).

Bar that I see this a good read and it has the potential for this to be good anime.

Sorry for the yapfest! Im just honing my subpar writing skills! he he :)
 
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