@GabrielH Although you might not read this anymore I wish for it to become a serialization as well but how would that be possible? Extend the time he possesses her? Have them switch bodies on regular bases while he still is in the hospital and have them communicate over letters they leave (I seriously start to like this idea after writing it down)? Maybe continue the story after the point the one-shot ends (Don't like this one)? The concept of the story does not work with too many chapters but let's hope for a short serialization although it's really not likely
@mommy Oneshots are usually just concepts. Keep mc in a coma, have the switches from time to time. The girl offering us more of the story too. Add some comedy elements with friends family etc you know.