One Step for the Dark Lord - Ch. 1

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I am sorry for the author but the female being dead is just way to fucking funny to be taken seriously when you look at the stupid design of the amors, I mean it does look like a comedy manga take on this type of design
 
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I am sorry for the author but the female being dead is just way to fucking funny to be taken seriously when you look at the stupid design of the amors, I mean it does look like a comedy manga take on this type of design
True, the art really doesn't match the tone. Doesn't bother me all that much though, I have more of a focus on the writing.
 
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I'm a bit concerned about the lord of the sea's characterization. On one hand, she is supposed to be incredibly experienced according to her thought process, but she still thought of the winged guy as their party member, didn't account for her lack of physical ability, and got caught up living day-to-day. Hopefully it gets more fleshed out.
 

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