Onii-chan Is Done For! - Ch. 101 - Mahiro and a Celebration

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Momiji was a lot more interesting near the start of the manga but many of her positive reliable traits were shared by Nayuta, and eventually Neko just wrote every moment that old Momiji would have had with Nayuta instead, leaving Momiji to only be the "crush on Mahiro" gag character. I agree that it's about high time that Neko revitalizes Momiji's reliable side and/or writes some new traits onto her in a focus chapter. His current direction for her on a greater level seems to be that he wants her to follow in Kaede's footsteps as a gyaru, so I think showing some legitimate development by having Momiji raise both her and Mahiro's girl power simultaneously on her own accord while lifting them both up would make for a great chapter.
I feel like Momiji is on a breakpoint right now and neither the author nor she herself are sure in which way to go. There is on one side the gyaru route, following her elder sisters footsteps and making her more feminine while still keeping the playful side and also opening up the possibility of teasing Mahiro. On the other is Momiji's boyish side, which itself could either just stay on the Tomboy route or potentially even go into the trans-male route, that was teased with Momiji wanting to take a drug that turns her male in order to marry Mahiro.
 

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