Onii-chan Is Done For! - Vol. 8 Ch. 76 - Mahiro and a Close Call

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Not sure if I liked this chapter or not, I don't like most of the "it grew back" chapters because it shifts focus from the fun/wholesome interactions or interrupts something new or interesting Mahiro was about to do (like the swimming class chapter)
And each time Mahiro mentions "rubbing one out" when that happens I just don't feel like it's the same character, it feels out of place and against any character growth Mahiro has had over all that time.

Not sure why Nayutan pretty much only operates as a panties & drug dispenser for Mahiro. Why doesn't Mahiro carry an emergency dose for occasions like this? It doesn't even add or remove anything from a gag/joke perspective.
Or why there even is a fast-acting short-duration version at all, since Mahiro needs it long-term anyway.

The more times the "it grew back" gags appear, the less impact it has. Which is why the anime version is the only one I actually tolerate (even though it also ruined Mahiro's onsen experience), because the payoff was absolutely golden and meant a whole lot more in the grand scheme of things.

I much prefer the cute and wholesome chapters with Mahiro's friends or Mihari (like ch.74), I hope there's more of those in the future for sure.

I don't see how wanting to "rub one out" every so often goes against the character growth. Mahiro's flaw was being a shut in with no friends not that the character had any desires at all.
 
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I don't see how wanting to "rub one out" every so often goes against the character growth. Mahiro's flaw was being a shut in with no friends not that the character had any desires at all.
Idk, I think announcing to your sister that you're gonna jerk off is a pretty weird thing to do. That's something Chapter 1 Mahiro did, but somehow it feels grosser now. Probably because Mahiro has been behaving more like a girl as time goes on, like getting jealous in the previous chapter, that it just feels off. Idk, it's hard to explain why I feel this way about this chapter in particular.
 
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Idk, I think announcing to your sister that you're gonna jerk off is a pretty weird thing to do. That's something Chapter 1 Mahiro did, but somehow it feels grosser now. Probably because Mahiro has been behaving more like a girl as time goes on, like getting jealous in the previous chapter, that it just feels off. Idk, it's hard to explain why I feel this way about this chapter in particular.
friend, his sister has grabbed his dick on several occasions now. Why is making a comment of wanting to jerk off so strange in a comedy/ecchi manga? People seems to forget that him turning into girl has no deeper meaning behind it, it's just a narrative tool to create fish out of water scenarios and most importantly, fan service...
 
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Is it me or for me this Chapter kinda feel 'boring' to me. Look, I'm not hating on the author but I know he/she is trying their best to draw Onimai but this Chapter does not appeal to me. The PP growing back is funny the first time I read but now it's getting kinda boring and repetitive plotline. Like, it basically, Mahiro get her PP back/ then it's all about trying to hide it, Momiji or Miyo notice something about Mahiro and next Nayuta or Mihari will give him the drug back and all is well. The To LOVE Ru touch is nice and Miyo sense of Yuri is frightening but overall it's not that great compared to previous chapters. The piss chapter as well. It's funny a couple of times but after a while the piss joke is kinda boring to me now.
 
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All these losers in the comments making up theories and talking about how this chapter was boring. Not realising that the author is setting up Nayu to win in the end.

Get your priorities straight fools
 
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Makes me wonder, do they have a production line to keep making the stuff, or is it all homemade. How do they source the ingredients and make it. Does it need specialised equipment? If so, whose equipment do they use, the lab's? What about the funding? Does management know? Are they using Mahiro as a test subject without him knowing?
 
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Wait, Gundam Seed Destiny was the one that coined the term lucky sukebe?
Was there really that many instance of lucky sukebe there? In non-modern Gundam? I should rewatch it.
 
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Hmmmm... from the look of it, they are either going to have to create stronger version of the drug or make it be permanent, though I suspect the latter is a good while away as of yet.

My guess is that in the next 20 chapters or so Mahiro is going to "flick the bean" so to speak. Very likely just implied moment rather than anything else. But I do feel like it might be heading for that. Tbf, that may depend on whether her sister can find out why the drug is lasting shorter, whether it is Mahiro getting excited or if they are building up tolerance... or both.

Honestly, even with the calm chapters like this I am enjoying this story. I didn't start reading this for quick progression, I started reading this to chill out and see an interesting transition of a person.
 
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All these losers in the comments making up theories and talking about how this chapter was boring. Not realising that the author is setting up Nayu to win in the end.

Get your priorities straight fools
since Nayuta is a middle schooler that would imply the "jailbait wait" trope(tvtropes), which is pretty weird
 
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Thank you for guarding the pureness of the yuri vibes, Miyo. It is with the highest of hopes that I eagerly await the day when Mihari develops a permanent version to forever seal away the dreaded dongulus for good.
 
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Darn this chap stepped up the lewdness all of a sudden.

One moment it's a cute 4-koma story about cute girls and the next the protag is trying to hide his boner from the same girls, and then later talks about fapping.

That was some whiplash lol.
My guy wanted to rub one out since chapter 1.
 
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Who would’ve thought SEED Destiny invented the lucky pervert thing, might need to rewatch it to see the moment that changed the world
 

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