Onmir The oddity

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imo he should try to work a bit on facial expressions, because all the characters with eyes make me feel like they are in great danger, extremely shocked, or on the verge of going crazy.
 
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I have high hopes for this one. I really like how the story is narrated. Also, the art style complements the the theme quite well.
 
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Seems quite promising, a seems to be a Souls-like world and I'm a sucker for those kinds of helmet designs. While it's not the greatest of art style, it just means there's a lot of potential for improvement as the story progresses. Lots of potential with this premise and characters, looking forward to this.
 
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art is okay, but the style gives it depth, and compliments the tone of the story. I really like it so far.
 
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It doesn't have that horrible empty white spaces with art in the very thin layout unlike a lot of other web comics, so that's a plus in my book
 

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