Orcsen Oukokushi ~Yaban na Orc no Kuni wa, Ikanishite Heiwa na Elf no Kuni wo Yakiharau ni Itatta ka~ - Vol. 5 Ch. 14 - Launch Point

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No thanks for translating Chapter 14, there is lot left to be desired. Lots of pages feel like MTL without Proofreading.
Cruiser ship name "Ahart" should actually be "Ahat".
Page 23, bottom right: "preparatio-ns" should be either single line or "prepa-rations", "prepara-tions", "pre-parations" as a splitting between lines.
Page 24 - arent the bubbles switched? Considering manga is read right to left?
Page 31 - the text in the bubbles makes no sense, as if each of them is separate.
Page 32 - bottom panel, butchered grammatics.
Page 39 - panel 1, again switched text bubble positions to right-left instead of left-right. Panel 2 - "We are finally taking to the skies in the Elfin way" - makes no sense.

I quit reading any further. Its pretty hard.

Actually, looking at the "group" name, yea, seems like i am correct - actual MTL slop.
 
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this orc leader is so cool! what the heck he might also be deranged
 

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