Ore ga Doutei wo Sutetara Shinu Ken ni Tsuite - Vol. 4 Ch. 22 - About How I Can Disappear In Peace

[Readingnrating]

@AminnudinBDG Nope she lost her vcard and she was using protection so she aint pregnant also

 

[JacobCada]

pretty sure this got axed, it feels rushed and they arent even together nor is this a proper tragedy.

 

[coco9767]

So the MC had feelings for blonde girl who had an older boyfriend for the entire manga, and she even fucked him even though she clearly also liked MC. And then MC and blonde girl don't even get together in the end. Seriously, what kind of cuck author writes shit like this. Absolute garbage. I swear, these garbage authors can't think of a way to do unique relationship drama so they just resort to "what if instead of a traditional romance, the love interest fucks some other dude the entire time." And then you have dumbass readers saying it's different and not cliche wish fulfillment stuff, and that somehow makes it good? Cuck manga like this is all either weird fetish shit or authors trying to be needlessly subsersive and edgy for the sake of being "different." And it pisses me off that so many people just eat it up thinking that this garbage is somehow more sophisticated than traditional romance stories, just because it's "different." Different doesn't mean better ffs

 

[dogmeister238]

I loved it.
The ending may looked rushed but it's not. It kinda tied the knots which was perfect
Kazuya really wanted to change himself and that he really did and the lengths he go through is amazing
honestly a go-to read if you want a redemption story
9/10

i agree. sometimes you don't want something super drawn out, and i think a lot of people are confusing their desire to see the characters more with their desire to see the narrative/story drawn out more. in regards to the story as a whole, i think the author delivered what they were trying to get at. any more of it would've felt like extra filler arcs.

 

[Juicemaker21]

Even though it was rushed I still really enjoyed the story, glad I managed to find this manga

 

[zawarudo]

If the author had always wanted to have Kazuya and Yoshino be the OTP, he should have written the earlier chapters better to make the later segueing of their romance feel more natural. The onscreen chemistry between Kazuya and Hazuki have always been much stronger, even after he rejected her for the final time.

The fact that post-timeskip loop 2 Masaki remained a hothead retard and that Hazuki clearly still has some feelings for Kazuya combined with Kazuya's final sentence made me chuckle. One of these days Hazuki will finally get tired of Masaki being such a donkey that she goes to have a "just this once" with Kazuya, likely ending with Masaki choking him again. The tryst doesn't even have to be with Kazuya when the original murder happened because Masaki blamed Kazuya for things the latter couldn't possibly control, and the former did absolutely nothing about. I also did not like the utilization of the stalker outta nowhere who was supposed to kill Yoshino - even if it was foreshadowed during one of Kazuya's schizo sessions with Masaki, it still felt too arbitrary and random at the same time just to move the plot along.

IMO the writing here is a solid 6/10. It could have been lower but at least the author tried making an ending where the primary conflict is mostly resolved and everyone is alive and well.