Ore ni Trauma wo Ataeta Joshi-tachi ga Chirachira Mitekuru kedo, Zannen desuga Teokure desu

[dogmeister238]

I hope it doesn't cus the story quality falls off a cliff imo with

Spoiler

the aunt backstory and what she did to him

how could it possibly have fallen off a cliff? it already started at the bottom lmao. especially with the cliche teenager angst of how every girl in his life wronged him and owes him lol, it's basically just those self-pity fantasies* kids invent to justify their insecurity and make their loneliness everyone else's problem, but it's somehow in official, published form lmao.

*e.g. some kid gets rejected by a girl, so he imagines a fantasy about the girl feeling guilty and never falling in love again. except they're aware that getting this flustered over a rejection makes them come off as petty and immature, so they sloppily invent and exaggerate the "crime" the girl "commits" to retain the moral high ground and sympathy.

except the details of the "crime" are so sloppy and childish that it's obvious it's just fabricated to superficially generate sympathy. in regard to literary value, it has none, not because it's fabricated (obviously all fiction is), but because it's a cheap device (as subtle as a brick) with no further idea or theme being explored. the experience being shared is so childish and silly that presenting it as a serious moment makes you crack up.

 

[Kalbiaczek]

This is so stupid that I love it, something to read at least