She gets better and better.
Page 7: "While may I look like this" - I think the may and I should be swapped? Sounds weird.
I wish this site saw one-shots as below chapter 0/1 like its shown in the main page. Every damn time a story has a one-shot connected to it, it nearly always shows up as "next chapter" after I read the newest. I get surprised that a new chapter got added while I was still reading, then get disappointed when I realise its once again the damn one-shot.