Ore no Oyome-san, Hentai Kamoshirenai - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.1

[MangaDex]

 

[dark_shadow_7654]

I am not as good as other translators. This is my first translated chapter.
Please let me know if there are any mistakes

 

[ivv]

my eyes are hurting somehow because of the size of the pages......
wait, ill try to change setting...
done.. fit all is much better..

 

[Angelonius]

The snusnu...

 

[Septazia]

Uh, it feels like "in media res", we started from somewhere in the middle, I would have recommended to wait until the whole chapter was done, it feels odd like this. I can't speak for the quality of the translation.

Maybe I would choose a different font, this one feels too "squiggly" maybe see the ones recommended here https://mangadex.org/title/08e1f85a-bb12-4fe4-aec5-0d7a80b3a261/anonblack-s-typesetting-guide

Also the spacing sometimes feels a bit off, the words are stuck too close to the box and for some panels it makes for slightly harder reading, just slightly, I have seen worse and beside I am no authority to speak on these things.

 

[dark_shadow_7654]

Uh, it feels like "in media res", we started from somewhere in the middle, I would have recommended to wait until the whole chapter was done, it feels odd like this. I can't speak for the quality of the translation.

Maybe I would choose a different font, this one feels too "squiggly" maybe see the ones recommended here https://mangadex.org/title/08e1f85a-bb12-4fe4-aec5-0d7a80b3a261/anonblack-s-typesetting-guide

Also the spacing sometimes feels a bit off, the words are stuck too close to the box and for some panels it makes for slightly harder reading, just slightly, I have seen worse and beside I am no authority to speak on these things.

thanks for your suggestions

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

It's a fine story for what it is, but it never justifies the title. If anything, a married man in a marriage with mutual feelings who won't approach his wife, he's the pervert.