Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- May 5, 2023
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this is.. ok its not been very good thus far. solid 5.5/10 which is still better than other utter trash I have read on this site.
While the writing itself has plenty to critique, I think the art is whats seriously holding this back. Its extremely inconsistent and at times down-right amateurish. IDK if it will solidify later on but from the chapters ive read, it isn't great, which is wild because sometimes you'll get a page that is absolutely impressive, and then the very next page its like one of those "how to draw anime" books you'd find at ur middle school book fair (usually written by some western shlub that hasn't ever looked at manga)
While the writing itself has plenty to critique, I think the art is whats seriously holding this back. Its extremely inconsistent and at times down-right amateurish. IDK if it will solidify later on but from the chapters ive read, it isn't great, which is wild because sometimes you'll get a page that is absolutely impressive, and then the very next page its like one of those "how to draw anime" books you'd find at ur middle school book fair (usually written by some western shlub that hasn't ever looked at manga)